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post Oct 15 2011, 11:37 PM
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Anyway, here's a small tid-bit on Riften: Riften is a kind adventurous Elf who was born in 3E 399 Valenwood, back then he was a religious Bosmer who went on many pilgrimages which gained him high standards with the Divines. Talos granted him Immortality and the Gift to change race and province at any time during his life, But he only does it every couple of years when he feels like his life during that time is uneventful or boring.

During his time travelling all of Tamriel he was Bosmer
During his time in Morrowind he was Dunmer
During his time in Cyrodill he was Manmer
During his time in Skyrim he was Altmer


Chapter 1:The Arrival

I awoke to find the shining sun blinding my eyes, as I stood up, something caught the corner of my eye, in the distance I could see beautiful, lush forests, Guards galloping on their elegant steeds. As I turned around, I was awestruck, a huge city, Ayleid architecture. I knew where I was, the glorious pride of the Empire, The Imperial City.

I was galloping to the entrance, something caught my eye that made me stop in my tracks, a foul smell crawled up my nose. There was a sewer with a deceased Dunmer laying there with nasty deep wounds. That reminded me, I didn't even know what race I was. I looked at my body, pale skin, short, I was a Breton! Thank Talos for that! As I looted the Dunmers badly wounded body, I noticed he was carrying a journal.

He went by the name "Valen Dreth" his journal was poorly written, barely readable, I squinted my eyes, it says that he was a prisoner in the City jail, poor fellow, he was only a week away from being free when a well dressed Imperial and a group of well armoured warriors, probably his bodyguards. The well dressed Imperial handed him an amulet, at least I think, after all it is barely readable. anyway, lets move on.



That's the end of Chapter 1 anyway, any feedback, tips, etc.... is welcome!

I'll be doing longer updates on Monday, Wednesday, Friday

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Riften   Riftens Cyrodilic Journal   Oct 15 2011, 11:37 PM
Thomas Kaira   Welcome to the Arena! Glad to see another pote...   Oct 16 2011, 12:17 AM
Riften   Welcome to the Arena! Glad to see another pot...   Oct 16 2011, 12:31 AM
Thomas Kaira   Rule number one: ENJOY YOURSELF! :D That is ...   Oct 16 2011, 12:45 AM
Riften   Rule number one: ENJOY YOURSELF! :D That is...   Oct 16 2011, 12:48 AM
King Coin   Hey, you're Talos on the BethSoft forums right...   Oct 16 2011, 01:28 AM
Riften   Hey, you're Talos on the BethSoft forums righ...   Oct 16 2011, 01:45 AM
Riften   Chapter 2:Imperial City, Arcane University As I ...   Oct 16 2011, 01:44 AM
Acadian   A warm welcome to you and your story! I lov...   Oct 16 2011, 02:20 AM
Riften   A warm welcome to you and your story! I lo...   Oct 16 2011, 11:03 AM
Grits   Welcome, Riften! I’m glad you’re posting your ...   Oct 16 2011, 04:45 PM
SubRosa   Hi Talos, welcome to Chorrol. There is no wavey e...   Oct 16 2011, 08:22 PM
Riften   Hi Talos, welcome to Chorrol. There is no wavey ...   Oct 16 2011, 08:27 PM
Riften   Chapter 3 - Disappointment at the University ...   Oct 17 2011, 05:22 PM
Acadian   Uh oh! It looks like Riften’s plan to pop rig...   Oct 18 2011, 01:33 AM
King Coin   Finally got around here. The Arrival Valen Dreth...   Oct 18 2011, 04:07 AM
Riften   Finally got around here. The Arrival Valen Dret...   Oct 18 2011, 04:49 PM
Riften   Chapter 4 - Bandits and the Steed I have more im...   Oct 19 2011, 04:36 PM
Acadian   Dead bandits don’t need horses I figure. :P Rift...   Oct 20 2011, 12:33 AM
Riften   Chapter 5 - City of the Nords The ring of Reavers...   Oct 21 2011, 05:36 PM
Acadian   This gives a whole new meaning to horse racing...   Oct 21 2011, 06:38 PM
Riften   Just done a little edit there! @Acadian - Ahh...   Oct 21 2011, 07:16 PM
Riften   I'm going for a short hiatus tomorrow evening....   Oct 22 2011, 09:20 PM
Riften   Chapter 6 - Home Sweet Home I entered the Nordic ...   Oct 26 2011, 10:36 PM
Acadian   Whew, I’m glad to see you continuing. :) So, R...   Oct 27 2011, 02:07 AM
Riften   Whew, I’m glad to see you continuing. :) So, ...   Oct 27 2011, 04:49 PM
Riften   Chapter 7 - Prequel - Dream of MorrowindMuch love ...   Oct 28 2011, 09:11 PM
Riften   Edit:Nvm   Oct 28 2011, 10:02 PM
TheBrume   I quite like this story and I look forward to see ...   Oct 28 2011, 11:26 PM
Acadian   How exciting! Tell me if I got it right: Thi...   Oct 29 2011, 12:23 AM
Riften   How exciting! Tell me if I got it right: Th...   Oct 29 2011, 12:30 AM
Riften   Change of mind, scratch this. I'm gonna leave ...   Oct 29 2011, 11:31 PM


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