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Doommeister
post Jul 4 2011, 10:54 AM
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Hi Everyone

I would just like to say thanks to everyone who has inspired me to write a story, namely Acadian, Malx, H.E.R, Minque, Black Hand, and many others.

I know it's only a short start, but please bear with me.

I welcome any and all criticism, as I am only a new writer. Hope you enjoy smile.gif


Arrival


I finally arrived at the Imperial City from Vvardenfall. The night before we docked I had a strange dream.

As I dreamed, I saw an old man in purple and blue robes, with three swordsmen fleeing through what looked like underground passages. they were ambushed by mortals in Daedric armour, and the old man was struck down.

His assassin grabbed an amulet from the old Imperial's neck, but was killed by the Redguard swordsman, who was screaming in anger. A rat came out of nowhere, grabbed the amulet, dodged the Redguard's grab and scurried off.

Strangely enough though, the old Imperial seemed to know I was watching, as he looked at me and desperately gasped out, "Find the Amulet of Kings and go to Jauffre in Chorrol."


Shaking, I was woken up by the ship's captain. Picking up my sword, armour, and several books I was led over to the Imperial Immigration office.

The stout Imperial who was sitting behind the large desk asked me a few questions, such as:

"What is your name, sera?"
I told him "Kael'thas Serethi"
"When were you born?"
I replied "30th Sun's Dawn 3E412"
"Your occupation?"
I said "Battlemage"
"And what is your purpose in coming to Cyrodiil?"

Getting frustrated with the ongoing questions, I spat out "I would like to explore this part of Tamriel. Is my interview over yet?"
The immigration officer sighed and told me to go.

As I walked out of the office, an Ayleid ruin seemed to jump into my sight.

This post has been edited by Doommeister: Jul 5 2011, 03:17 PM


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As the assassin draws near, despair!
As the assassin draws near, pray for mercy!
As the assassin draws near, beg for your life!

The hands of fate have been cruel to you my friend. I will grant you a quick and painless death.
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Doommeister   Story of a Battlemage   Jul 4 2011, 10:54 AM
Black Hand   Awesome sauce! A bit skimpy for the introducti...   Jul 4 2011, 01:29 PM
mALX   GAAAAAAH !!!! What an AWESOME TW...   Jul 4 2011, 03:05 PM
hazmick   A good start! As mALX said, a great twist on t...   Jul 4 2011, 04:21 PM
haute ecole rider   First let me say welcome Doommeister, to the arena...   Jul 4 2011, 06:31 PM
Doommeister   @everyone: I used an alternate start mod. so didn...   Jul 4 2011, 10:50 PM
mALX   @everyone: I used an alternate start mod. so didn...   Jul 4 2011, 11:45 PM
Acadian   Nice! I am really looking forward to what hap...   Jul 6 2011, 12:23 AM
Acadian   As Rider has said, welcome to the Arena! :D ...   Jul 4 2011, 11:41 PM
haute ecole rider   Both Acadian and mALX are right, there is no need ...   Jul 5 2011, 12:12 AM
Doommeister   I have redone the first post, as I wasn't, and...   Jul 5 2011, 10:01 AM
ghastley   I'd start by changing the character's name...   Jul 5 2011, 01:57 PM
Doommeister   I'd start by changing the character's nam...   Jul 5 2011, 03:19 PM
haute ecole rider   That was better. Still not quite what I was lookin...   Jul 5 2011, 04:42 PM
mALX   Your re-write is fine, I was very happy with the f...   Jul 5 2011, 10:52 PM
Doommeister   Hey guys sorry about the long wait. My internet di...   Aug 1 2011, 05:11 AM
mALX   PC issues seem to be going around! My PC cras...   Aug 3 2011, 08:57 AM
Doommeister   Hi everyone I just want to say that I will not be ...   Dec 17 2011, 06:32 PM
mALX   Hi everyone I just want to say that I will not be...   Dec 17 2011, 06:38 PM


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