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Zalphon
post Aug 6 2011, 07:15 PM
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Prologue
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My ebony long sword danced into the flesh of the heretics. It would slide itself into one, and then tear into another. I noticed each of the heretics cower as Lord-Templar Draconis walked forward. We all kneeled as he strode to the middle of the battle-field.

“You dare defy the word of Kalian Broodikus, Heretics?” he shouted. “The Inquisitors ‘may’ show mercy if you accept the error of your ways.” It was rumored that Lord-Templar Draconis had traveled with Kalian himself. Apparently his aura of fear intimidated most of the heretics and they dropped their weapons.

A fair-haired woman with snowy skin shouted, “You may break our bodies, but Kalian is long-gone. He is no god.” Each of the heretics, who had surrendered, picked up their weapons and charged.

“Troopers of Kalian follow the Templar into war,” I cried out. “Their attempts to defile Kalian’s Valor will go unsuccessful.” I watched as the chain-mail clad troopers charged into battle behind us templar.

Lord-Templar Draconis shouted out a prayer, “Lord Kalian, please bless me with the ability to control holy fire!” Suddenly a long, thin serpent of flame was conjured and it was commanded by the Lord-Templar. Within moments, the battle-field had the stench of charred flesh. The stench of heretic charred flesh arose from each of the blackened corpses.

“Templar, lead your troops back to Skingrad,” the Lord-Templar ordered. “Templar Ashur, report to me in Castle Skingrad.” The grassy plains were stained with blood and ash. It was the price of war. Lord-Templar Draconis wished to speak to me, but why?

We began marching to Skingrad. Well over forty miles, we’d likely arrive in two days. However, what did Lord-Templar Draconis want of me? Had I done something wrong? Few earned the Lord-Templar’s attention without either impressing or angering him.

After two eventless days of marching, we saw the bustling city of Skingrad. The sermons had just ended and children were out playing. Men and women alike were working. When they saw us marching, they applauded. We were the Templar and the Troopers of Kalian and their protectors.

The soldiers slowly drifted off to perform their own affairs, but I found myself walking towards Castle Skingrad. Civilians and Troopers saluted me alike. Across Tamriel, any Templar was revered. Finally I reached the large, double doors of Castle Skingrad and the troopers opened them.

I nervously walked towards the throne room. Sitting on it was Lord-Templar Draconis in his armor. We both were. Templar always wore their armor except when they bathed or slept. I pulled off my helmet, “Lord-Templar, you asked for me to come?”

“Templar Ashur, you rallied the troopers,” he slowly explained as he pulled his helmet off. His white skin, icy blue eyes, and jet-black hair made him look even more intimidating. Those eyes followed me and I could feel them searching me for fear.

“I did, Lord-Templar,” I replied honestly. “It’s my duty as a Templar to unite them under my word. I am a Champion of Kalian’s Will.” My voice was sincere, proud, and afraid all at once. I couldn’t tell if he was angry or impressed yet.

“Templar Ashur, I’ve watched you for some time,” the Lord-Templar nodded. “Kalian and I were once friends. We fought side-by-side and once against each other. I wish for you to bring me someone…actually somebody of much importance to me and to Kalian.”

“Who do you refer to Lord-Templar?” I questioned.

“His native name is Sar-Kura or as he is called in Tamrielic, Quick-Strike,” he explained. “Quick-Strike was one who trained Kalian, as I did as well. However, I taught him in the Ways of the Old Religion.”

“What is the Old Religion?” I wasn’t sure if it was worship of the Aedra or the Daedra. Or if it was worship of some ‘god’ that wasn’t either of them.

“The old religion is worship of the Aedric Deities. Many followed them before Kalian saved Mundus and became a god.”

“Sar-Kura, is he dangerous?” I knew the answer to that. If he taught Kalian anything he was likely a master of his trade.

“He once bested me in combat before I could draw my sword.” I gulped. The Lord-Templar of Cyrodiil was the most powerful of the Lord-Templar. He was second only to Kalian and he only answered to the Templar-Emperor out of respect, not fear.

“And you seek for me to bring him to you, Lord-Templar?”

“Kalian will guide your blade and ward you from Sar-Kura,” Lord-Templar Draconis nodded. “After Kalian became a god, Sar-Kura betrayed his pupil and refused to acknowledge that Kalian was the only deity worthy of worship.”
“He betrayed his own apprentice? Who could do that to their own pupil?” I heard the words of betrayal to Kalian. But how could one who taught him and fought with him betray him?

“The Argonian assassin did it to Kalian. Also, ‘J’skooma’ or ‘Ra’Kyre’ is a Khajiit Wizard who was extremely loyal to Sar-Kura while I traveled with him.” The cold breeze of the castle winds forced me to shiver, but I simply nodded acknowledging what he said.

“The last time I spoke to Sar-Kura was twelve years ago right below the top of the White-Gold Tower,” he explained. “He’ll likely find you before you find him, Templar Ashur.” Those words sent ice up my spine.

“Yes sir, when may I leave?” I asked curiously. “And may I take some other Templar or some troopers with me?”

“You’re to go alone,” the Lord-Templar stated. “Let your equipment be your shield and your faith be your weapon. Sar-Kura and Ra’Kyre must pay for their treacherous actions.” I slowly bobbed my head to show acknowledgement and I grabbed my helmet. As I walked out, my black cloak flowing softly behind me.

The Templar looked at me and saluted with a fist to chest. When I reached the giant, double-doors two troopers pulled them open. I had to begin my search, but where? Who would know anything about them?


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Zalphon   Legacy   Aug 6 2011, 07:15 PM
Acadian   So, it's back to Zalphon lore. Plenty of fami...   Aug 7 2011, 01:24 AM
Zalphon   Have had writer's block. And now I'm star...   Aug 7 2011, 02:46 AM
mALX   WOO HOO !! My favorite characters are BAC...   Aug 7 2011, 04:01 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: True Sight (Part I) With my hands ti...   Aug 19 2011, 07:10 AM
Acadian   So Ashur finds himself with a touch of self-doubt ...   Aug 20 2011, 03:14 AM
Zalphon   I figured they needed names more fitting than Quic...   Aug 20 2011, 03:28 AM
mALX   The last three paragraphs are outstanding !...   Aug 21 2011, 12:02 PM
Zalphon   Chapter One: True Sight (Part II) I bobbed my h...   Aug 27 2011, 01:43 AM
Acadian   Woot! Evangeline's back! You are re...   Aug 27 2011, 02:08 AM
Zalphon   We've got friends both old and new...I was won...   Aug 27 2011, 03:06 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: True Sight (Part III) I looked bac...   Aug 29 2011, 12:39 AM
Acadian   How neat to see the return of Q-Stick in his black...   Aug 29 2011, 01:25 AM
mALX   Chapter one (True Sight Part II) was an Awesome wr...   Aug 29 2011, 03:14 PM
Zalphon   I like Ashur. Just as I liked Kalian. They'r...   Aug 29 2011, 06:45 PM
Destri Melarg   I love the new names given to Q-Strike and Skooma ...   Aug 29 2011, 09:26 PM
Zalphon   I forgot about the two moons. And I got it, becau...   Aug 30 2011, 04:25 AM
Zalphon   Chapter One: True Sight (Final Part) Sar-Kura l...   Aug 30 2011, 06:58 AM
Acadian   Ashur is really changing. Even he can see it. ...   Aug 31 2011, 12:45 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: The Trials of the North (Part I) I...   Sep 1 2011, 08:45 PM
Acadian   Another companion! Ashur and QS and Ri...   Sep 2 2011, 01:55 AM
Zalphon   Of course they did!   Sep 2 2011, 02:46 AM
mALX   You are great at ending your chapters with a power...   Sep 2 2011, 03:52 AM
Zalphon   Not even a single comment on J'skooma having a...   Sep 2 2011, 05:03 AM
Zalphon   I apologize for the lack of updates lately, I...   Sep 20 2011, 12:29 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: Trials of the North (Part II) The ...   Sep 25 2011, 05:32 AM
mALX   Great stuff, Zalphon !!   Sep 25 2011, 05:52 AM
Zalphon   Removed by Author.   Sep 25 2011, 08:45 PM
Acadian   First blood. And Ashur is on a path to vengeance....   Sep 26 2011, 12:02 AM
Grits   Yay, an update! But oh no, Bruma! I’m root...   Sep 28 2011, 03:03 PM
Zalphon   I don't know if their is a stigma with this, b...   Oct 7 2011, 12:36 AM
mALX   ARGH !!   Oct 7 2011, 09:51 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: Trials of the North (Part III) The...   Oct 8 2011, 05:33 PM
Acadian   So a battle at Bruma is joined. Kirsten the Immor...   Oct 9 2011, 12:13 AM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: Trials of the North (Part IV) His ...   Oct 9 2011, 03:32 AM
Acadian   A tense duel, and victory for Ashur. And a new c...   Oct 10 2011, 12:39 AM
Grits   Ashur had a tough fight, and even though he won, h...   Oct 10 2011, 12:47 AM
mALX   Holy Cow, Zalphon! This is some riveting stuf...   Oct 10 2011, 09:43 PM
Zalphon   Thanks guys. I'm glad to hear the good news. ...   Oct 11 2011, 01:40 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Two: Trials of the North (Final Part) T...   Nov 13 2011, 01:02 AM
Acadian   You impart a nice, epic feel here as Ashur laments...   Nov 13 2011, 01:12 AM
Zalphon   I feel that conversation had a lot more to it than...   Nov 13 2011, 03:18 AM
mALX   This is Awesome, Zalphon !! Poor Ashur, t...   Nov 13 2011, 03:22 AM
Zalphon   Thanks :D   Nov 13 2011, 04:09 AM
Grits   Zalphon, I found this chapter beautifully and conc...   Nov 13 2011, 02:20 PM
Zalphon   Thank you, Grits :) Caves of Fjalding should be...   Nov 13 2011, 04:23 PM
Zalphon   Chapter Three: The Caves of Fjalding (Part I) Be...   Nov 14 2011, 05:25 AM
Acadian   Ashur did a good job of finding and exploiting a w...   Nov 15 2011, 01:09 AM
mALX   This is amazing, Zalphon! I've always bee...   Nov 15 2011, 03:58 PM
McBadgere   Excellent job!!... Nice one... :D ... Bt...   Nov 16 2011, 05:37 AM
Zalphon   The Templar are very, very devout followers of Kal...   Dec 2 2011, 03:28 PM
McBadgere   Cheers... :D ... Excellent stuff though...*Applau...   Dec 3 2011, 05:54 AM


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