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Saquira
post Dec 2 2011, 05:58 PM
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So, I've been working on this since before Skyrim came out now and I think it's about time I publish it. I'm still working on Felisas Memoires, I actually got really inspired yesterday and wrote up the ending so now I know exactly where I want to go with it. I just wanted to get started on publishing this story as well.

I'm no longer working on A Strange Love, you'll probably have gotten it by now but I just wanted to get it out. I might go back to it and continue sometime, but then I'll make a completely new version and it probably won't happen for a very long time.

I change a lot of the things in the main quest in this story, because the dragons really should be able to use all the shouts(it's their language after all) and a lot of other reasons. Ekali won't only follow the main quest though, not like Felisa did. And I'll also have this story be much more orderly, in that I'll divide every chapter in numbered parts and will be writing a "what came before" paragraph at the start of each update.

Anyway, this is the story of the khajiit Ekali, and her journey through Skyrim.

Ekali of the Frozen Heights
Book one


Prologue

The female threw herself across the cold stone just as fire lit the sky, melting the snow of her former location. The beast roared out his rage as he turned after the khajiit, pale fangs still hot from the fire. She thought up the words when its jaws clamped shut above her, forcing Ekali to roll out of the way as it brought its head down again.

Fo Krah!” The shout was loud, and covered the beast in frost as he lifted his muzzle towards the sky in rage. He flapped his wings, unleashing more fire in her direction, and took to the air.

Getting up from her crouch, the khajiit sprinted across the ice crusted stone, coming to a stop at her pack from which she drew a bow and quiver. The bow was already strung in anticipation for an event just like this, and she put an arrow to it just as the beast came around for another go. Her hands wouldn't be still as she aimed for the creature, and it was by chance that the arrow stuck in its throat. She sprinted again as he roared in fury, black eyes intent on her body.

Dovahkiin! Zun Haal Viik!” His powerful voice was triumphant as the bow flew out of the woman’s grasp, and she cursed, barely avoiding the swipe from his tail when he flew past. As it was the blast of wind knocked her of her feet, and she pictured a fireball in her mind as she got up again. The dragon was wrapped in flames mere moments before his feet connected with her shoulders and threw her backwards.

Her feline claws where out before she had time to process the empty space beneath her feet, clinging like picks to the ice encrusting the rocky mountain. The stone shuddered as the dragon landed and made his way towards the precipice on which she was hanging.

Dovahkiin.” The beast smiled at her as he lowered his head, looking over her white body.

The tension on her claws was causing a numbness in her hands when she hung there, and the khajiit grunted when she tried to get a better grip on the cliff side as well as getting her legs up. She'd be damned if she didn't get up, she knew that all to well.

“Trouble, Dovahkiin? Perhaps you should have practised your claws before coming, they often make a lot of difference.” He smiled again as he reached one of his feet out, extending a claw. He looked at it briefly before turning back at her. “How is it you say... oh yes, any last words?” Ekali kept quiet and he smiled again, edging further out on the edge to get to her.

The light of the blue green aurora reflected on his scales when he got closer, making him look even more majestic than before. His head had the shape of an arrowhead with spikes that were angled backwards from his face. His eyes were dark, and the scales had a soft brown colour to them.

She narrowed her eyes at the dragon as she tried to get a better grip on the ice, and clung tighter when the wind picked up, tousling her fur. The ice was mixed with snow, and her hands were barely noticeable because she didn't wear any gauntlets at the time.

The beast crept closer still, and put his foot on her paw to be able to break her grip. With a last smile that caused the blue light to be reflected by his teeth, he tore her away from the cliff, and opened his mouth to shout.

Fus Ro Dah!” The shout threw her further away from the ledge, away from any hope of survival, and caused her to yell out in shock.

Oh hellfire, was the one thought that went through her head as she looked down at the ground far beneath her, the wind wining past her ears.

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End note: So, there's the prologue. You don't get to find out what happened for a long time though as the prologue takes place long after the first chapter, which I intend to post the first part of on Tuesday. And I really like constructive criticism. biggrin.gif


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Saquira   Ekali of the Frozen Heights   Dec 2 2011, 05:58 PM
McBadgere   Oooh, excellent stuff... :D ... So, the man with ...   Jul 1 2012, 07:45 PM
King Coin   Balgruuf gave a small bow in reply, and Ekali mad...   Jul 2 2012, 03:27 AM
Saquira   McBadgere: That shows how much I know about flirti...   Jul 2 2012, 11:20 AM
King Coin   I do like this new version better than the other. ...   Jul 2 2012, 02:21 PM
mALX   I am loving these poems! You are talented in ...   Jul 2 2012, 03:13 PM
Saquira   King Coin & mALX: Thank you ^^ Yeah, it'll...   Jul 5 2012, 10:37 PM
King Coin   The beginning the whole thing was very interesting...   Jul 8 2012, 06:41 PM
Saquira   King Coin: Yeah, all the dragons whom Ekali slays ...   Jul 16 2012, 06:36 PM
McBadgere   Sorry...One episode back...Will definately catch u...   Jul 19 2012, 01:05 PM
McBadgere   Right, I'm so completely over-excited about wh...   Jul 20 2012, 06:50 PM
Saquira   Counted the last chapter as last weeks episode, so...   Jul 22 2012, 02:58 PM
McBadgere   Ah, Ivarstead!!...Lovely place... :D ... ...   Jul 28 2012, 04:50 AM
King Coin   Ch 4.1 The Khajiit caravans! A lot of fun to ...   Jul 28 2012, 03:26 PM
Saquira   Do'Rak gave me the feeling of a father figure ...   Jul 29 2012, 10:57 AM
McBadgere   Um...I'm always scared to give advice because ...   Jul 29 2012, 11:35 AM
King Coin   Do'Rak gave me the feeling of a father figure...   Jul 29 2012, 03:43 PM
Saquira   King Coin: Yeah, I know I should comment more. I j...   Jul 29 2012, 06:42 PM
King Coin   Actually I think gold in skyrim = septims. They ju...   Jul 29 2012, 07:28 PM
Grits   Regarding currency, they’re still called septims i...   Jul 30 2012, 11:36 AM
Saquira   Alright. Well, I'll change the names for the c...   Jul 30 2012, 11:55 AM
McBadgere   Oooh...I like the Orc!!...He's cool......   Jul 31 2012, 06:04 AM
King Coin   I was expecting the usual “What’s a milk drinker l...   Jul 31 2012, 05:48 PM
mALX   That is so odd you brought that out in your story,...   Aug 28 2012, 05:52 AM
Saquira   McBadgere: What do you think? I'm not going to...   Sep 18 2012, 06:25 PM
McBadgere   Brilliant stuff, as ever... :D ... Loved the feel...   Sep 22 2012, 01:55 PM
Saquira   McBadgere: :D Thank you. Previously on Ekali of ...   Sep 29 2012, 05:51 PM
King Coin   4.4 The brief section training with the Greybeards...   Sep 30 2012, 07:20 PM
McBadgere   Fair dues, this story is brilliant... This part h...   Nov 9 2012, 07:14 PM
Saquira   King Coin: :lol: Walking around High Hrothgar nake...   Nov 17 2012, 04:54 PM
King Coin   “I beg your pardon, but I have no wish to fight ...   Dec 15 2012, 02:08 AM
McBadgere   Fantastic stuff... Absolutely loved the dragon at...   Dec 13 2012, 01:53 PM
Saquira   So, I finally managed to write this chapter, and I...   Dec 15 2012, 11:39 PM
McBadgere   Brilliant stuff... Loved the way you wove that Wi...   Dec 17 2012, 07:18 AM
King Coin   I was wondering if she was going to be seeing the ...   Dec 17 2012, 08:58 PM
Saquira   McBadgere: Thank you, I'm glad it worked as we...   Dec 17 2012, 09:23 PM
King Coin   I just... I made him order glögg!!! :...   Dec 17 2012, 10:53 PM
mALX   I'll be catching up on this tomorrow, have a f...   Jan 11 2013, 04:31 AM
mALX   My PC has been up and down and I keep losing my no...   Jan 16 2013, 01:55 AM
McBadgere   Yes, yes they do...And some shouts take longer ...   Jan 16 2013, 05:23 AM
mALX   Yes, yes they do...And some shouts take longer...   Jan 16 2013, 05:50 AM
Saquira   Hi! I'm back... for a while at least. I fi...   Apr 5 2013, 08:59 PM
McBadgere   Blimey!... It's no wonder it took you so ...   Apr 6 2013, 09:35 AM
mALX   Sorry it's taking so long, Saquira - will be b...   May 7 2013, 06:19 AM
Saquira   McBadgere: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. I ...   May 9 2013, 04:58 PM
McBadgere   That was epic!!... I loved that it was an...   May 11 2013, 10:52 AM
mALX   * I haven’t met the talking dragon in my game yet...   May 13 2013, 06:31 PM
Saquira   McBadgere: Thank you, I quite like Ustengrav as we...   May 13 2013, 09:30 PM
mALX   McBadgere: Thank you, I quite like Ustengrav as w...   May 13 2013, 11:08 PM
Saquira   Previously on Ekali of the Frozen Heights: Ekali a...   Jul 28 2013, 08:13 PM
McBadgere   Fair dues...Brilliant, as ever... :goodjob: ... I...   Aug 2 2013, 12:57 PM
Saquira   Previously on Ekali of the Frozen Heights: Ekali b...   May 29 2014, 11:23 AM
McBadgere   YAY!!... :D ... An excellent story, and o...   May 30 2014, 03:50 AM
Grits   I enjoy the dragon conversations very much. It’s g...   May 31 2014, 06:51 PM
King Coin   It has been both a long time since you have update...   Jun 1 2014, 05:35 PM
Saquira   Author's note: It's been far too long sinc...   Jan 31 2015, 03:09 PM
McBadgere   I know exactly what you mean... :-/o ... Prope...   Feb 1 2015, 07:52 AM
Saquira   McBadgere: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it :)...   Feb 6 2015, 02:48 PM
McBadgere   Well, that was pretty darned awesome, right there....   Feb 7 2015, 09:57 AM
Saquira   Author's note: Hopefully I should be able to p...   Feb 24 2015, 11:55 AM
Saquira   Previously on Ekali of the Frozen Heights: Ekali c...   Mar 1 2015, 12:46 AM
Grits   I like the changes you made to the game’s story. I...   Mar 1 2015, 03:02 PM
Saquira   Author's Note: This chapter has been in the wo...   Jul 24 2015, 03:17 PM
Grits   I’m happy to see Ekali’s adventures continue. She ...   Jul 24 2015, 04:00 PM
Saquira   Yeah, I know what you mean :D I've never manag...   Jul 24 2015, 09:46 PM
McBadgere   Y'ssss!!!... Another fic I've...   Aug 2 2015, 09:51 AM
Saquira   Author's Note: This chapter has been a very lo...   Jan 13 2016, 05:06 PM
Grits   What a lovely introduction to Fleet! It was ...   Jan 18 2016, 10:25 PM
McBadgere   Fantastic!!... :D ... Really loved this u...   Jan 26 2016, 02:24 PM
Saquira   Grits: Yeah, I really wanted to expand upon Lydias...   Jul 17 2016, 07:26 PM
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