The journal of a simple scholar., First attempt at a "fic", be gentle! Options

[McBadgere]

Can I just add that I think your writing's brilliant as well?...Just re-read what I'd put, and I did't say that, and I meant to...Just forgot... ...See...*Points*...Clevererer...er...er....

Nice one...Looking forward to more of your story...*Applauds*...

[SubRosa]

Finally got a chance to read. The short piece in post #6 was outstanding. I saw a number of grammar nits, but those aside, the story was filled with powerful emotion. Much of it was unpleasant. But that is not at all a bad thing in writing. Getting your reader to feel something, anything, means that your writing is working. You evoked powerful images of loneliness, isolation, and alienation. Especially in the part with the elves. Well done!

[Fawkes]

Thank you guys so much, really means allot to me! I just got a new charger for my laptop So I can finally get online and start writing! lol

I will have a couple of more short pieces as well as the other plot-y piece by next week, my cousin just bought me Dead Island as a early bday present so I might be busy

[mALX]

WOO HOO !!!

[Acadian]

A hearty welcome to chorrol! It is nice to see the Killerpenguin join us for some fanfic.

I read the episode that you posted here on the forum (post #6) and was sure I was in front of an ancient Ayleid City – until you clarified that was not the case. Now I am quite curious about the mysterious elves, the cursed child and the marble city. Oh, and Jabba the Hut Sload. You are evoking some interesting images.