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| Red |
 Jun 7 2005, 12:40 AM
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[quote=KhabaLox]I'm the haiku ape
some here know me already bad poems stick out excel numbers man intellectua admin* all around nice guy *thanks Ang :eek:[/quote] My god, challenge my haiku skills? You shall rue this day! darkness is his friend, in your home unseen he lurks. Completely unseen. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Red |
Jun 7 2005, 01:12 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Thanks for moving this, this may turn out to be a good thread.
He loves his bad job, Taking what is not needed. Money down the drain. Out the door he goes, With all of your hard earned cash. Now he’s stinking rich *There is more in my sig. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Dantrag |
Jun 7 2005, 05:28 PM
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 Councilor  Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
I get F's on haiku's at school.
I don't get 'em at all...other than 3 lines and have to have x number of syllables per line. I say just write a poem without limits... Don't get me wrong, your haikus are good. -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| KhabaLox |
Jun 7 2005, 06:56 PM
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public library
built by community hands sharing written words -------------------- Dave was the personification of humanity.
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| Red |
Jun 7 2005, 08:46 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Thanks Dantrag. Haiku's are strange, they sound easy enough, but the best Haiku artists spent decades secluded from people writing Haiku. Also, amazing Haiku KhabaLox!
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| Red |
Jun 7 2005, 08:49 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Large storms rolling in,
all of the crops will be fed. The sun is hiding. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| minque |
Jun 7 2005, 09:13 PM
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 Wise Woman  Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
This is interesting..will someone tell me the rules and the technique in writing Haiku??
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| Ambberfox |
Jun 7 2005, 09:18 PM
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 Knower  Joined: 13-February 05 From: A cozy fox den... |
I don't even know what Haiku is... :incrediblysad:
-------------------- "One day before Oblivion is released, you'd better buy the best hardware components available for money..." - Todd Howard
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| Burnt Sierra |
Jun 7 2005, 09:19 PM
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[quote=minque]This is interesting..will someone tell me the rules and the technique in writing Haiku??[/quote]
A Haiku is a three line poem that contains 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second, and 5 syllables in the last line http://teacher2b.com/creative/haiku.htm You might find that useful. |
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| Konji |
Jun 7 2005, 09:43 PM
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If it was all wrong,
and in the end they are right, then what is the point? There you go....masterpiece.  --------------------   |
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| Aki |
Jun 7 2005, 09:46 PM
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[quote]I get F's on haiku's at school.
I don't get 'em at all...other than 3 lines and have to have x number of syllables per line. I say just write a poem without limits... Don't get me wrong, your haikus are good.[/quote] Haiku is easy simple poem and fun one Don't diss Haiku 
Had to do it, couldn't resist. --------------------  "You’ve put up a good fight, but I’m through playing. Now I’m going to kick your [censored] and tell of my glory under the next full moon. Die well.” |
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| minque |
Jun 7 2005, 09:49 PM
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Wise Woman Joined: 11-February 05 From: Where I can watch you!! |
oh thanks guys...now i understand....it´s a very nice kind of poetry.....hmmm :goodjob: :lickinglips:
-------------------- Chomh fada agus a bhionn daoine ah creiduint in aif�iseach, leanfaidh said na n-aingniomhi a choireamh (Voltaire)
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| DoomedOne |
Jun 7 2005, 10:09 PM
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 Master  Joined: 13-April 05 From: Cocytus |
Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think all a haiku has to be is certain number of syllables? Bah.
First part: Description of something Second Part: After thought -------------------- A man once asked the Buddha, "How does one escape the heat of the summer sun?"
And the Buddha replied, "Why not try crawling into the blazing furnace?" |
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| Konji |
Jun 7 2005, 10:24 PM
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Mouth Joined: 24-May 05 From: Behind you! |
eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite annoyed with him, I shall ignore him! :<  -------------------- |
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| Dantrag |
Jun 7 2005, 11:30 PM
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Councilor Joined: 13-February 05 From: The cellar of the fortress of the fuzz |
[quote=Konradude]eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite annoyed with him, I shall ignore him! :< [/quote]
:rofl: now that's funny. And doomedone, while you are correct, a haiku still has to have that many lines and syllables. So both parties are correct. (I may not be able to write them, but I know what they consist of.) -------------------- "Its when murder is justice that martyrs are made"
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| KhabaLox |
Jun 7 2005, 11:32 PM
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[quote=DoomedOne]Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think all a haiku has to be is certain number of syllables? Bah.
[/quote] And you are ignoring the correct spelling of 'you're'. -------------------- Dave was the personification of humanity.
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| DoomedOne |
Jun 8 2005, 02:02 AM
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[quote=Dantrag][quote=Konradude]eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite annoyed with him, I shall ignore him! :< [/quote]
:rofl: now that's funny. And doomedone, while you are correct, a haiku still has to have that many lines and syllables. So both parties are correct. (I may not be able to write them, but I know what they consist of.)[/quote] Red your signature was correct, and I understand the syllable rule. Note I did not mention it. Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing lines of water color paint on a canvas and calling it a water-color art piece. EDIT: I thought about editting my "your" but... yeah, ignored it. -------------------- A man once asked the Buddha, "How does one escape the heat of the summer sun?"
And the Buddha replied, "Why not try crawling into the blazing furnace?" |
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| Red |
Jun 8 2005, 01:12 PM
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Mouth Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here. |
Which part of my signature? The first one? The pessimist?
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| DoomedOne |
Jun 8 2005, 10:58 PM
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Master Joined: 13-April 05 From: Cocytus |
All three.
-------------------- A man once asked the Buddha, "How does one escape the heat of the summer sun?"
And the Buddha replied, "Why not try crawling into the blazing furnace?" |
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| KhabaLox |
Jun 8 2005, 11:56 PM
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[quote=DoomedOne]Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing lines of water color paint on a canvas and calling it a water-color art piece.
[/quote] I don't get it. Is it art if you use oils instead of water-colors? Jackson Pollack (and a lot of art critics) seemed to think so. Poetry is as poetry does. -------------------- Dave was the personification of humanity.
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