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SubRosa
post Jun 24 2013, 05:26 PM
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The inspiration for this story came to me last week. As will probably be evident to many, this is an homage to the masterpiece by Akira Kurosawa. It is my humble attempt to translate that great story to the Elder Scrolls Universe. Following the old adage of striking while the iron is hot, I decided to put the TF on hold while I write this instead. Once I am done, I will get back to the TF, and wrap it up with one more chapter.

This is also a prequel, taking place eight years before the events of the TF, shortly after Aela and Ungarion graduated from the Arcane University.


Seven

Prologue

25th Second Seed, 3E425

Vishta-Zaw slithered through the mud with ease. In fact, he had to take care not to move too quickly, lest he overtake Dark-Eye. The other Naga would look upon that as a challenge for leadership of the company. A challenge that Vishta-Zaw was not ready to make, yet. For while his one-eyed leader's age was beginning to show in the fading color of his once dark green scales, his killing power had not subsided. The way he had dealt with the hackwing the day before had made that clear...

Soon the land began to rise, and the mud turned to drier, hard-packed dirt. That made the going slower for the pack of Nagas. Where folk with two legs had an easy time on such ground, it was more difficult for his race to propel themselves upon their serpentine lower halves. Unlike ordinary snakes, they had a torso, head, and arms to balance aloft above their thick tails. It was much easier moving through the swamp's water and muck, where their tails could whip them forward at speed. Yet still they managed without complaint. The latter was a sign of weakness, and weakness was not tolerated in Dark-Eye's company.

In time they topped a ridge and Dark-Eye came to a halt. Vishta-Zaw slithered up beside his leader and followed his one-eyed gaze down into the valley below. Stretched out there in the small, oval-shaped bowl of land stood the settlement of Agrigento, a collection of simple timber and reed homes raised up on stilts in the traditional Argonian fashion. At the center of the village rose a tall structure of the Imperial style. It's walls were entirely of stone, pierced by numerous windows filled in with hinged glass panes, and topped by a roof of glazed red tiles. A fence of simple woven reeds bordered the settlement, and beyond that water-logged rice paddies stretched in all directions. Dykes of hard-packed dirt spread out in a grid through the fields, dividing them up into numerous flooded squares.

Imperials, they just loved to impose their straight lines, squares, and rectangles upon everything. They seemed to think that their geometry would somehow bring them closer to the gods. Any Naga could have told them that nothing on Nirn was straight and neat. All their efforts did was separate them from nature. The Naga wizard knew that would only doom them to extinction. It was only a matter of time.

His eyes fell upon the Imperials laboring in the rice paddies. They went barefoot through the water, wearing simple dark tunics and conical reed hats to ward off the sun. Alongside them toiled their tamed Argonians. Once the Saxhleel had been a strong, proud people, Vishta-Zaw mused. But like so many of them now, these had abandoned the ancient ways of the deep swamp, and now what had they become? They were little more than slaves for the smoothskins. The Naga race would never fall so low.

"They are bringing in their crop," Dark-Eye observed. "Good, I grow thirsty."

"It will take them time to dry and husk the rice," Vishta-Zaw leaned against his staff, which was tipped with a large chunk of flame-red crystal. "Then they will need more time to brew their soju."

"To brew our soju," the chieftain corrected him. The side of his head that faced the wizard was gouged with deep scars leading through the ruin of his eye socket, which was covered with a jeweled eye-patch.

Dark-Eye turned to level his remaining indigo eye upon his lieutenant, and then the gang of other Nagas behind them. "We will give them six weeks," he cried. "Then we will return to wet our throats, and have some sport!"

That brought a chorus of assenting hisses from the other bandits. Some banged their spears against the rims of the small, bone shields. Others simply stabbed their weapons skyward in expectation of the revelry.

* * *

Hathei held his breath until the Nagas had gone. Even then he still waited, just in case any of them returned, or were still lurking in the shadows of the trees. Magnus crawled through the sky, and several lesser creatures crawled across the Argonian's washed out yellow-brown scales. Still he waited, not moving an inch, in the way that only his race could do.

Finally Hathei rose up from his belly and stood straight. His gaze darted through the trees that lined the top of the ridge, seeking anything out of place. Yet there came no hisses or croaks of discovery, no spears came flying out to pierce his scales, and no magicka crackled to snuff out his life.

The aging Argonian was thankful for the bundle of reeds that was slung over his back. If not for them, surely the Nagas would have seen him. He had been lying on his stomach, just inches from their bellies, with only the camouflage of those reeds between him and certain death. Now that bundle of reeds slowed him down as he turned and ran for the village below. He was tempted to throw them aside so that he might run faster. But he knew he would only have to return for them later. At his age, he did not have the energy to do the same thing twice. So he labored on, as farmers always do.

His mind whirled as he made his way down the slope of the valley to the settlement below. They were coming back, again! They would take all of the soju, just like the last time, and the time before. Worse, the Nagas might take another of the women again, just as they had Rullianus' wife. What had been left of her after they had finished would have made a butcher sick. Who would they take next? His own daughter Meen-Sa?

No, not Meen-Sa. He could not let that happen to her. They had to do something this time. They just had to.

This post has been edited by SubRosa: May 5 2019, 11:00 PM


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SubRosa   Seven   Jun 24 2013, 05:26 PM
haute ecole rider   Loved the balancing of revelations between the two...   Jan 4 2014, 04:36 AM
Acadian   Turning a summoner’s summon against him is such fu...   Jan 4 2014, 03:09 PM
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SubRosa   haute ecole rider: That sense of cautiously measur...   Jan 10 2014, 12:06 PM
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Acadian   Uh oh. Aela’s down! ‘Valens rocked back, se...   Jan 11 2014, 03:51 PM
ghastley   Of course, now Aela has to explain to the Agrigent...   Jan 11 2014, 06:11 PM
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SubRosa   Grits: I had a lot of fun writing the showdown bet...   Jan 17 2014, 04:33 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   [b]ThatSkyrimGuy: It's good to see you back S...   Jan 30 2014, 05:42 PM
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ghastley   From Talun-Lei's notes: "Must take two wa...   Jan 20 2014, 11:43 PM
SubRosa   haute ecole rider: I was thinking exactly what you...   Jan 24 2014, 05:43 PM
Acadian   Lady of Decay vs Queen of Twilight. I love it...   Jan 26 2014, 01:00 AM
ghastley   Since whatever it is wasn't summoned, but simp...   Jan 26 2014, 01:37 AM
haute ecole rider   I agree with ghastley on the sentence fragments in...   Jan 26 2014, 06:53 PM
Grits   Now the bandit leader leveled his one eye squarel...   Jan 27 2014, 04:07 PM
SubRosa   Acadian: Dark-Eye was not originally going to be N...   Jan 31 2014, 04:06 PM
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King Coin   I’ve been away from this story far too long. 3.8 ...   Feb 1 2014, 10:40 PM
King Coin   3.9 This was a great follow up to the previous se...   Feb 2 2014, 05:27 PM
haute ecole rider   Well, that was quite the rousing battle. You did n...   Feb 2 2014, 08:14 PM
King Coin   Ch 3.10 Back at the brewery. Sounds like despite ...   Feb 3 2014, 03:37 PM
King Coin   Ch 3.11 I’m caught up! :D Ahh excellent! ...   Feb 4 2014, 04:42 PM
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Grits   I especially loved the opening sequence with Aela,...   Feb 5 2014, 05:42 PM
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King Coin   Now the true challenge begins, defeat the bandit h...   Feb 10 2014, 12:14 AM
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Acadian   An emotional roller coaster you served up! :...   Feb 14 2014, 11:53 PM
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