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gamer10 Niran Jun 18 2005, 09:50 PM jonajosa Very nice. Just remember those paragraphing rules.... Jun 18 2005, 09:53 PM gamer10 Very nice. Just remember those paragraphing rules.... Jun 18 2005, 09:55 PM Zelda_Zealot Paragraphing rules? Why was I now informed!? ;) ... Jun 19 2005, 03:47 AM Dantrag cool. Nice to know the history of your character..... Jun 19 2005, 04:16 AM gamer10 cool. Nice to know the history of your character..... Jun 19 2005, 04:32 AM Mazuk Nice story Jun 19 2005, 04:42 AM gamer10 Chapter 2
Days went by, which followed into wee... Jun 19 2005, 08:50 PM Dantrag Cool. Can't wait for more.
Edit - apparently, t... Jun 19 2005, 09:00 PM gamer10 Cool. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for the gener... Jun 19 2005, 09:01 PM minque Yes! this is good.....keep writing you hear? ;) ... Jun 19 2005, 09:05 PM Dantrag Happy? my post is now lees generic. Jun 19 2005, 09:06 PM Ze Milanio Another underdog story... I often wander what is i... Jun 19 2005, 09:27 PM gamer10 I come up with ideas as I go. No plotting it out. ... Jun 19 2005, 09:33 PM gamer10 Be careful reading this next chapter, the flashbac... Jun 19 2005, 09:56 PM Mazuk Awesome writing. Keep it up and don't keep me in ... Jun 19 2005, 10:15 PM gamer10 Awesome writing. Keep it up and don't keep me in ... Jun 19 2005, 10:17 PM Mazuk LOL yeah I like suspense to but only for a little ... Jun 19 2005, 10:19 PM Dantrag Awesome writing. Keep it up and don't keep me in ... Jun 19 2005, 10:20 PM gamer10
Don't write yourself into a corner. If you don't... Jun 19 2005, 10:21 PM jonajosa
Don't write yourself into a corner. If you don't... Jun 19 2005, 10:22 PM gamer10
That is somthing nobody ever learns the easy way... Jun 19 2005, 10:23 PM Konradude I'm sure it is briliant writing gamer! Keep it up.... Jun 19 2005, 10:24 PM Mazuk Yes me to thanks for the advice...is an amateur yo... Jun 19 2005, 10:25 PM jonajosa "mess" if you don't understand Jonajosa language. ... Jun 19 2005, 10:25 PM Konradude You can't spell lol? :O Jun 19 2005, 10:25 PM gamer10 "mess" if you don't understand Jonajosa language. ... Jun 19 2005, 10:26 PM jonajosa Lets put it this way. My dead grandmother types fa... Jun 19 2005, 10:29 PM Konradude ? Is that a joke? Jun 19 2005, 10:29 PM jonajosa The smiley at the end should give it away. But i d... Jun 19 2005, 10:31 PM Mazuk It happens alot to me when I am typeing faster tha... Jun 19 2005, 10:36 PM gamer10 It happens alot to me when I am typeing faster tha... Jun 19 2005, 10:37 PM Mazuk Sure it is. Just the signal doesn't move fast eno... Jun 19 2005, 10:39 PM gamer10 Sure it is. Just the signal doesn't move fast eno... Jun 19 2005, 10:40 PM gamer10 Note- Yay! I'm on a writing spree!
Chapter 4
... Jun 19 2005, 11:58 PM gamer10 Chapter 5
I walked up to the tallest building I... Jun 20 2005, 12:26 AM MerGirl Pretty good. :goodjob: The only piece of advice ... Jun 20 2005, 12:58 AM gamer10 *reads Mergirls post*
Thanks for the advice. I'... Jun 20 2005, 01:03 AM MerGirl
;) No offence taken.
Whew! :ashamed: I... Jun 20 2005, 01:25 AM gamer10 I'm willing to help in any way I can. So just PM i... Jun 20 2005, 01:27 AM Red Well, you've inspired me Niran. time to start Shak... Jun 20 2005, 01:56 AM gamer10 Like I said to Mergirl, I can help. Just PM me. Wh... Jun 20 2005, 01:58 AM Red Thanks. You guys are going to like some of his dre... Jun 20 2005, 02:04 AM gamer10 I especially like doing panicky scenes, sometimes ... Jun 20 2005, 02:09 AM Red I especially like doing panicky scenes, sometimes ... Jun 20 2005, 02:16 AM gamer10
I like Shakur's dreams. And the seven, they're c... Jun 20 2005, 02:17 AM Mazuk Nice story. Quite the ending but You said you was... Jun 20 2005, 02:36 AM gamer10 I edited the post that said that, now it says some... Jun 20 2005, 02:37 AM Zelda_Zealot Nice, two updates in one day. Good ones too, keep ... Jun 20 2005, 02:42 AM Mazuk Ok nutty. Good job and since I didn't have to wai... Jun 20 2005, 02:42 AM Zelda_Zealot Dont worry about it, I do it all the time *Just go... Jun 20 2005, 04:07 AM Dantrag good job gamer10.
interesting that you read far... Jun 20 2005, 05:51 AM Konradude Good story again Niran! Waiting for the next one..... Jun 20 2005, 06:59 PM gamer10 Good story again Niran! Waiting for the next one..... Jun 20 2005, 08:40 PM gamer10 A revised edition is going to be on it's way in a ... Jun 21 2005, 05:53 PM Zelda_Zealot Sounds good, I look forward to reading the "NEW AN... Jun 21 2005, 05:59 PM gamer10 Niran
Revised Edition
I’d like to thank all t... Jun 21 2005, 11:08 PM Zelda_Zealot Much better! :goodjob: Jun 21 2005, 11:11 PM Dantrag yay...are you going to continue the story or do we... Jun 21 2005, 11:44 PM gamer10 What do you mean, when Niran is arrested at the en... Jun 22 2005, 12:11 AM Mazuk Nice Gamer. That seems alot better reviesed. Awes... Jun 22 2005, 12:30 AM Dantrag What do you mean, when Niran is arrested at the en... Jun 22 2005, 12:41 AM treydog Will we ever discover how he came to "cause the de... Jun 22 2005, 03:14 PM
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