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MerGirl
post Jun 26 2005, 02:41 AM
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[quote=Red]I think I might scrap this story actually. Don't panic! It's being rewritten in third person. First person makes progressing difficult. But be patient, it will be back and improved.[/quote]

*panics* Eeek!
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Oh, okay. You scared me. Well, when you re-write it, are you going to post it here? Let me when if it is posted during the next few weeks (I have volunteer program stuff to deal with). smile.gif
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Dantrag
post Jun 26 2005, 02:44 AM
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Ah, 3rd person.

I personally don't like first person half as much. So, you'll have a more enthuiastic reader from now on...ME! biggrin.gif


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MerGirl
post Jun 26 2005, 02:53 AM
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[quote=Dantrag]Ah, 3rd person.

I personally don't like first person half as much. So, you'll have a more enthuiastic reader from now on...ME! biggrin.gif[/quote]

Yeah, 1st person is much too hard. Some characters are uneducated or too young to really get a good feel for 1st person view. If I typed the Emma story in first person, that would be too hard, because Emma is only six years old. :shocked:

But, I have confidence in you, Red. Please, please write soon! :goodjob:
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Red
post Jun 26 2005, 02:58 AM
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Thanks for the support everybody, expect more updates, lower waiting times, higher quality stories and above all, longer paragraphs.


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Mazuk
post Jun 26 2005, 03:11 AM
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Yeah tell me about it. I can't come up with any thing for my next chapter. Ugh. Anyways Nice update and if you rewrite. "Hurry and Post"
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Fuzzy Knight
post Jun 26 2005, 08:44 AM
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Hmm, interesting Red... Nice story :goodjob:
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gamer10
post Jun 26 2005, 01:05 PM
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[quote=MerGirl]
Yeah, 1st person is much too hard. Some characters are uneducated or too young to really get a good feel for 1st person view. If I typed the Emma story in first person, that would be too hard, because Emma is only six years old. :shocked:
:goodjob:[/quote]

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Uh, right. I only write in first person
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