Nice written combat scene as always Wolf.. Also nice to see that Jonacin has some trouble addapting(sp?) into using Heavy Armor, but still he manage to find a solution to the win the find in a very risky way
This isn't an update, i just want to inform anyone who cares that the last update was the end of Chapter one. God only knows when chapter two will be posted, because i can't think of what to do in it
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D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes
Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato
Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton
Well well LoneWolf... I have also had this that I dont update for a long time on my stories and it suddently gets a little bit boring and I have no way to go with the stories. Tried to change that in my newest Fan Fic... but doesn't seemed to have changed anything.
But your story about Jonacin is very good and well written so I have you can keep it up...
Just managed to find this one (how could I have missed it?). You have a very unique story here, with a storytelling approach somewhat different from most of the others. I hope you find time/inspiration to continue working on this story, since I feel it adds something very special to these forums.
In case anyone is interested, the first part of chapter 2 will be coming soon, hopefully
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D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes
Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato
Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton
Woohoo I can't wait for chapter 2. I really enjoyed your sparring match. It was so accurate in how his mobility was hindered due to his armor. I loved it and I will be watching for the next installment!
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“Worry not, young Breton. This will be over very quickly but I wish I could say that it would be painless. You will suffer greatly before you join the countless other souls that fuel my power.” - Taillus
Woohoo I can't wait for chapter 2. I really enjoyed your sparring match. It was so accurate in how his mobility was hindered due to his armor. I loved it and I will be watching for the next installment!
D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes
Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato
Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton