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post Jun 21 2005, 08:51 PM
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color=white]I have decided to do this FanFic as a Journal recovered from Shakur's tomb, and not an autobiography.[/color]

On a certain night, of a certain month all contained in a certain year, I sat at the dinner table, chewing away, laughing, talking and smiling. I had invited my friend Hides-In-Eyes, a very sneaky Argonian but a good lad, for dinner. My parents, my sister, my friend and myself sat around the table, until the “Raining” took place. A flush of flaming arrows landed at once like hail on a tin roof, one piercing through the wood and cutting Hides-In-Eyes’ hand. Four men, three Imperials and one Dunmer rushed in. I was fourteen, fourteen, when I drew blood. Most 50 year olds haven’t killed a man. But there I was, stabbing an imperial in the face with a steak knife and then strangling another with my hands. And yet I didn’t think. I just acted. Watching my mother burning a man to death isn’t all too pleasant either. The Dunmer had been set aflame, but escaped death by ripping of his shirt. He ran screaming “You Redguard S’wit are scum!”. And that wasn’t the bad part. The town ignored it. They ignored the neighbors stopping the fire on the arrows. They ignored Hides-In-Eyes’ stitched wound. They ignored the bodies being dragged off by the local mage. They ignored that whole night as if it were torn from the calendar. But no one could ignore the Daedric writing on the robe. The writing that only the local librarian deciphered. Raelan Telganii.[/b]


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//LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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Red   The Journal of Shakur "the Red" Ir Shin   Jun 21 2005, 08:51 PM
gamer10   Re: The seventh, Chapter 1   Jun 21 2005, 09:02 PM
Mazuk   Nice. FYI to bold something put in [ b ] words [ /...   Jun 21 2005, 09:07 PM
Red   Thanks everybody! I'm just starting chapter 2 now.   Jun 21 2005, 09:10 PM
Fuzzy Knight   You're a great writer Red, I knew that from seeing...   Jun 21 2005, 09:14 PM
Red   Some of the chapters are short but there will be m...   Jun 21 2005, 09:25 PM
Dantrag   Go Red go! sweet story. I want to hug it. :pa...   Jun 21 2005, 09:28 PM
minque   very nice start....really! you may consider some p...   Jun 21 2005, 09:38 PM
Dantrag   *gasp* TWO jonajosas? this story will be a new...   Jun 21 2005, 09:52 PM
gamer10   :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Three of them.   Jun 21 2005, 09:58 PM
Red   Three?!?!?!?!?!?!?! The bible has nothing on me. :...   Jun 21 2005, 10:25 PM
MerGirl   Ooh, this is cool, reading Shakur's story! :) I r...   Jun 22 2005, 12:30 AM
Red   Thanks for the tips. It was more of a experiment o...   Jun 22 2005, 03:59 AM
jonajosa   :goodjob: :goodjob: :goodjob: Three of them....   Jun 22 2005, 05:48 AM
Red   Praise from Caeser.   Jun 22 2005, 12:36 PM
Dantrag   yes, Red, you have an awesome story...stop rubbing...   Jun 22 2005, 02:01 PM
treydog   An interesting start. Hope to see more detail in ...   Jun 22 2005, 02:48 PM
Red   Okay, Here's the Chapter two rough draft: The ...   Jun 22 2005, 09:10 PM
Dantrag   *wonders how he missed an update* good start of...   Jun 26 2005, 02:08 AM
Red   I think I might scrap this story actually. Don't p...   Jun 26 2005, 02:13 AM
MerGirl   I think I might scrap this story actually. Don't p...   Jun 26 2005, 02:41 AM
Dantrag   Ah, 3rd person. I personally don't like first p...   Jun 26 2005, 02:44 AM
MerGirl   Ah, 3rd person. I personally don't like first p...   Jun 26 2005, 02:53 AM
Red   Thanks for the support everybody, expect more upda...   Jun 26 2005, 02:58 AM
Mazuk   Yeah tell me about it. I can't come up with any t...   Jun 26 2005, 03:11 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Hmm, interesting Red... Nice story :goodjob:   Jun 26 2005, 08:44 AM
gamer10   Yeah, 1st person is much too hard. Some characte...   Jun 26 2005, 01:05 PM


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