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Demon's Uprising RP 001 - Plan And Discussion |
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Sinder Velvin |
Apr 4 2005, 10:25 AM
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Knower

Joined: 9-February 05
From: Over THERE!

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[quote=Oozae][quote=davion]the demon king guy im tlaking about isn't materialized in the real world he is nothing but pure spirit dunno if that would work[/quote]Why not make it that the Valpyre's used Ada'Soom's body to make the Demon King (Which Ada'Soom is). And that bit I wrote about that rogue Valpyre and the Valpyre mage and the letter, for that I could make it so they are using Ada'Soom's soul for something (that could be decided later, I guess) and so when I get back and look into why the mage and the rogue Valpyre are together I find out they are using his soul for something.... Good idea?[/quote]
Just remember that you're the Valpyre General, so you're the boss.
And read up on what you missed. You don't want to make nasty inconsistencies.
[quote=Fuzzy Knights] Zerath
He looked at Bradas... Before replying;
" Well... He thought that there was no reason to kill as I am the fals Duke. As you know have captured two of them I think that will be enough, I dont think they will risk the lives of their fellow friends trying to save them. Insted we can trun them over to Archmaster Vendal..." he paused looking at Vornac strapped up against the wall in one cell and Vealon in another...
" Vornac looks quite beaten up, looks like he is dead... But anyway I guess he is alive. I have summoned five former Her Hands Ordinators to guard them, telling them they are a great threat to Morrowind..." Zerath said before giving Bradas a clap on the shoulder, knowing that he had saved his boat...
" Well, I will stay here talking it out with the guards, u go to Archmaster Vendal telling we have Vealon and Vornac..." he said to Bradas before taking the guards to the wall and opening a hidding corridor and then a stair to lead up to the Duke's Hall in Ebonheart...[/quote]
Fuzzy Knights, Zerath didn't have Vornac and Vealon. Bradas did. Zerath didn't even know that Bradas had Vornac and Vealon. Please edit your post.
Also, could you please keep Ordinators out of this? They don't answer to the Duke.
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Sinder Velvin |
Apr 4 2005, 05:06 PM
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Knower

Joined: 9-February 05
From: Over THERE!

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[quote=davion]Davion found himself once again falling through the same abyss as last time he journied to hell.
Davion lay motionless on the hot rock, unable to see for several minutes, until a figure walks out of the shadows, a amulet shining in his hands.
"So kid, your back for good this time." The demon says to Davion, chuckling.
"Bite me . ." Davion replies, getting to his feet.
"Ho ho ho, fiesty for dieing a second time are we?" the demon exclaims. As Davion stands up and looks around the room, the demon king places the amulet of House Krellos around his kneck, and Davion jumps back and says, while trying to pull it off,
"What the hell is this?"
"It is a mark of House Krellos, your new home. It shows to all that you are a Special Elite in my servaces. When your summoned, it glows green telling you to come speak to me." The Demon King exclaims, pointing at the amulet then pointing at himself.
The Demon King grabs Davion by the kneck and throws him into a little room full of hate and blackness. There Davion stayed for what seemed like weeks, forever being taunted by the souls of the people he's killed.
A few days later, Davion amerges from the room, his soul twisted and abused, barely able to keep sanity, the way he was before doesn't seem apparent anymore.
"Davion, my greatest creation, i give you the honor; nay; the privledge, to hunt down your former comrades and strike them down!" The Demon King annoucnes to the room. Then the Demon King opens a portal infront of Davion and signals for him to go in.
"You, my child; Davion, go forth and strike fear into all who live in Tamriel!" The Demon King tells Davion, his voice echoing through the caved room. Davion gives an evil look back at the Demon King, then vanishes.[/quote]
House Krellos!? The Demon King has nothing to do with House Krellos. Midave Vendal is the Archmaster of House Krellos, and he's a Dunmer.
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Oozae |
Apr 5 2005, 11:34 AM
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Knower

Joined: 13-February 05
From: This space rented by Oozae

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[quote=Fuzzy Knights]Oozea.. u can be the Valpyre General, so u can go more out.[/quote]What do you mean? [quote=Fuzzy Knights]The Demon King is not of the Tamriel World.[/quote]If you're talking about Ada'Soom, he is of the Nirn world (Tamriel is merely a continent in the world of Nirn), so that is untrue. If you are talking about the illusion, than that also is untrue, he doesn't exist at all or at least as far as I have read. If this is wrong, please correct me. [quote=Fuzzy Knights]So it would be better if u were somekind of Valpyre Elite summoned to kill us (the adventurers)  [/quote]I think it's a bit too late. But I could either get mixed up with The Adventurers somehow, or go to kill you myself or send an NPC to kill you... However I don't know whether I could actually do that because I haven't sent any of the assasins. Up until the letter, I never even knew of it. There are other things too, but I doubt I could pull it off smoothly enough without contradicting what I have already wrote...
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Oozae |
Apr 7 2005, 12:13 PM
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Knower

Joined: 13-February 05
From: This space rented by Oozae

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[quote=Channler]err. thats a good question.. now that I think about it only 3 days.. time is moving very slow.. say I would lie and say a week or so  [/quote] Three days!!! Wow that's a lot.. Everything sure is fast-paced..
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"Make a fire for a man and he's warm for a short time. Burn a man and he's warm for the rest of his life" Terry Pratchett
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Aki |
Apr 12 2005, 01:13 AM
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Mouth

Joined: 10-March 05

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Err.. Davion, you latest post desn't make any sense. Aki is kind of being interrorgated...
So appearing out of nowhere and giving stuff out aint going to work.
That, and Aki isn't planning on escaping yet. Hes trying to find out what Midave knows first. Aki, being a Werewolf, could leave the moment the sun goes down. Cells aren't meant to hold back pissed off Werewolves.
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 "You’ve put up a good fight, but I’m through playing. Now I’m going to kick your [censored] and tell of my glory under the next full moon. Die well.”
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Channler |
Apr 12 2005, 12:10 PM
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Master

Joined: 20-March 05
From: Nashville, North Carolina

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[quote=davion]i know when you left you put me in a writers hump[/quote]
I figured it would... but I needed to find myself.. err my character did I mean. Don't worry I'll be back.. with a vengance
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