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Acadian
post Apr 14 2025, 12:04 AM
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Siouxie the Banshee and any mysterious dogs will just have to wait as Laprima dons her ambassadorial persona.

Laprima is taking her duties seriously and putting plenty of effort into learning everything she can about the jarl of Falkreath. Her line of thought is exactly what I’d imagine from a diplomat and I’m glad you spent the time to share how she is going about learning whom she’ll be dealing with. And what to wear, be properly bathed, rested, etc.


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post Apr 14 2025, 08:46 PM
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The presence of that dog on the edge of Falkreath does not bode well, after the Banshee's tale of the man with the dog.

I see that like King Henry V, Laprima has decided to go among the commoners disguised as one of them, in order to hear what they really think about things. What they have to say does not do Jarl Sid much credit. However, as Laprima so astutely discerned, the division between Sid and Den over the Stormcloak/Imperial situation might indeed prove to be important. If she can convince him that his continual rule over Falkreath depended upon his support of Ellie and the Empire, that might be the leverage she needs.



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post Apr 15 2025, 01:20 AM
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Laprima setting aside the prior shenanigans to suss out Falkreath's politics is a fun break from the macabre. However, the lack of Banshee during their day in the city has me suspicious, especially after the encounter with who I assume was Barbas.


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post Apr 16 2025, 05:34 PM
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I have a feeling that Siouxie (or her deeds) are already possessed by some unknown force...

...which may have something to do with the dog. The dog was in Laprima's dreams as well. Something vile is in the air.

But what I enjoyed in this story the most, was Laprima's "analyze" of Jarl Siddgeir.


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post Apr 20 2025, 02:05 AM
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This is gonna be the final chapter of season four. sad.gif blink.gif ohmy.gif indifferent.gif cool.gif Yeah, I know. I wanted to write up at least two more chapters but I've lost inspiration. Which is fine. Time to move on.


Acadian: Yes, she's taking her duties seriously, mm hmm. Thanks. I also enjoyed the sublime switch from Siouxie's demanding personality back to focusing on Laprima herself, and her plans.

SubRosa: Wow, King Henry V would go amongst the commoners, oh my gosh! I had no idea.

I bookmarked all those cool armor sets, btw. Ready to go.

Kane: That's a good way to put it. "A fun break from the macabre." She's become so consumed with her "job" all the sudden, she hasn't got time to deal with her silly goth friend.

Barbas! 🐕🐕 Woof woof!

Lopov: Sure, could be that Siouxie is possessed, that thought has occurred to me as well.

Everyone noticed the dog, even though there wasn't much emphasis on it during the moment. goodjob.gif

Me too. I love writing up the noble/royal stuff. Getting into my gal's head, trying to see what her concerns shall be.

All: This upcoming chapter has been written after only two drafts, not the usual four or five, and it's not the best. But maybe it'll be fun to see what an earlier LPD draft looks like. Saga of Laprima shall return hopefully in December, hopefully without all those technical problems. bleah.


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post Apr 20 2025, 02:36 AM
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At some point during her day, mostly which was spent keeping away from the others somewhat, Siouxie realized they were now closer than ever to the truth. They, not just she, herself. But they. Them.

It had been a long venture, seeking the words of the others she'd been in deep contact with for months now. She had begun this venture by herself, had at some point begun joining Laprima at night during their dreams (which her stubborn friend still refused to admit) and now they were both nearing the truth. Standing at the precipice of knowledge which would change everything and all.

"Let us resolve this matter with the jarl, and with haste," she muttered while standing deep within a thicket.


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The day was getting long, the sky dark. Laprima was getting sleepy. Even so, she wanted to peruse the Jarl's Longhouse before returning to the others, just to get a further feel of the court of Falkreath, its leader and his minions.


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But maybe best to wait upon such measures. Dead Man's Drink, the town's inn, was calling. Maybe it's time to heed that call. Surely by now, one of the folks she interviewed earlier in the day could also be ensconced within the longhouse at this very moment, describing 'some black-haired lady wearing armors of hide' asking too many questions about the jarl and his policies. Wouldn't be prudent to then just appear within the court before she's thought everything through, and with a good night's rest bolstering her assuredness.

"What can I get ya?" asked Valga Vinicia, the inn's bronze-skinned keeper.

Laprima went for her usual: soup and bread with some Surilies to drink it down. Erm, yes. Surilies. Premium wine with a year and a label, imported straight from Skingrad, was a luxury of course. But it would help boost confidence, she figured, to treat herself beforehand. An hour ago, she'd sold a second batch of useless potions to the town's general goods store, and now had some money to splurge.

Dead Man's Drink was crowded: seven soldiers and one mage spent the night along with the inn's works, the pretty blonde bard, an assortment of other folks passing through for the night. Really it was remarkable how easy it was for her to fall asleep, considering the fact she'd mostly slept in just two beds during her upbringing. Two beds, the first one smaller than the bed she'd been given during teenage years. Two beds, in a home which was so insulated with varieties of stone walls and wooden fixtures, it was like a tomb.

My how things had changed. Every night before heading to whatever bed or roll she'd rented during this new life of hers on the road, she wondered how she'd be able to gain respite so publicly. And now here she was, bedding for the night in yet another open room, because most inns in Skyrim did not even have doors!

Her slumber came as the raucous sounds of some sort of drinking game filled the tavern. Tomorrow would be another day perhaps, or it could be the very day which changed the very direction of the war itself.



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post Apr 20 2025, 04:17 PM
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So arrives the end of another season of Laprima Donnough.

Siouxie is deep within a mystery still unraveled and unsussed.

Ambassador Laprima is focused like a firebolt on the task that awaits her in the morning – bringing diplomatic tidings and proposals to Falkreath’s jarl.

I shall try to patiently await next season. tongue.gif


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post Apr 20 2025, 08:43 PM
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I don't think Henry V did the dress as a peasant trick in real life. It was something he did in Shakespeare's play about him. The night before the battle of Agincourt he did it in order to go among his troops to find out what they really felt about him, and the coming battle. He wanted to get a good understanding of their morale, and how willing they were to fight.

Siouxie is clearly up to something. But what is anyone's guess.

We know what Laprima is up to however, preparing for her meeting with the Jarl the next day. I appreciated her bed time reflections on how her life has changed so much from when she was younger. I am sure she never imagined that her life would take her to where she is now, on the road and acting as an ambassador.

Take your time getting to next season. If your zeal has dried up, then it has dried up. Don't try to force it. Write when you want to. Not because you feel like you have to.


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post Apr 21 2025, 11:37 PM
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Laprima's sleeping habits remind me of my own. I'll crash anywhere at day's end, even on the floor. Though I'm probably going to age out of floor kips soon.

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post Apr 25 2025, 08:52 PM
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A nice and short ending for the season that actually serves as an intro for the upcoming one. smile.gif

Lots of questions remain unanswered, lots of mysteries unsolved, the scheming forces haven't yet been revealed, so I'm looking forward to the next season already.

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post Apr 27 2025, 12:21 AM
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It is going to take time for me to catch up to speed here.

I really loved the inauspicious start. Mmmm, teasing exactly who this Laprima is and what effect she will have on the royal circle of Solitude. No doubt you are a long way into the story and I am miles behind, haha

Solitude was perfectly describe- just how can a capital be designed like that, and how can can we get lost when walking up that hill. I have felt exactly that!

Tasty! I like this story!

edit- Ahh, she is the niece and the bride-to-be.

Why do I get the feeling that is not going to work as planned, haha

I can see her standing there watching the execution, blood flying everywhere, in her stately gown!

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post Apr 28 2025, 06:12 PM
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Acadian: thanks! Next season shall return in December, I'm hoping. We had a "real" winter in 2025 this year, it actually got pretty cold. If the end of 2025 is similar LPD shall return in December.

Florens: Ah I see, so Henry walked amongst his troops to get a feel for what they thought about him.

Siouxie is clearly up to something, and now I have the next eight months to figure out what it is. tongue.gif

smile.gif Graci smile.gif

My zeal hasn't dried up surprisingly, it's merely shifted! I wrote the pilot chapter for Joan's next season last week and was surprised how many words got onscreen before I had to quit. But yeah, always bad to force words that aren't there.

Kane: I used to be like that in my teens and 20s: I could couch surf anywhere! sleep.gif In '99 into 2000 I lived in a van, couch-surfing again at a variety of friends' places when it got too cold. But nowadays I'm too germ-phobic. Never been a floor sleeper though, that's remarkable!

Lopov: As said to 'Rosa above, during the next eight months I'll dwell on this story here and there so that the mysteries are further revealed to me. Because I know what's to come sort of, but hopefully by December I'll really know what's to come.

Winter Wolf: Thanks so much, cool.gif Hope you enjoy. I only play Skyrim if it's below 65F (18C for Aussies, I think), overcast days, and mostly bleak foliage, or flowery spring outside. Now that it's warm I switched to Morrowind.

Okay, you're reading about the wedding and such, so that's way back. It's quite a lot, but I can break it down for you in a message if you like. I've written synopses here and there from season to season, but can't remember how extensive they are.


Alright, shall return in December. Or January. Especially if we have another "springlike" winter in 2026. salute.gif



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post May 6 2025, 05:08 AM
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Looking forward to December.


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post May 9 2025, 04:13 PM
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I have just finished Season 3 and Sixpenny’s betrayal. What a fight! What a triumph for Laprima! I love that she joined in the joke telling after the crew had let out their victory yelling. I feel like this is a big milestone for the young noble from Cyrodiil. Also, hooray destruction staff!

The battle at Robber’s Gorge was epic. RIP Mansonn. That hit hard, discovering his loss at the end of the scene.

I am such a fan of the Red Rokkr. He cracks me up, and he has some real wisdom for Laprima.

On to season 4! I have a feeling it has already concluded as I start reading, since it has really warmed up here. I imagine it’s gotten too warm for Skyrim in Maryland.


Oh! I almost forgot to mention how amazed and impressed I am that you mod all these missions into Laprima's game. When there's a screenshot at the end of a section showing your mod dialog I always get an extra thrill. That stuff really happened! They really said that! Whoop!


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post May 9 2025, 07:01 PM
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Gosh, Siouxie has a lot of influence on Laprima. That makes me nervous.

The whole Crow House adventure was interesting. Clearly they had their own experiences there, but the flute is real and is still there after they leave the area. Hmm. I’m happy to see a clue about the lost Elija.

Yep, Siouxie’s rapid magical gains in the Synod seemed too good to be true. I love the scene and screenshot in Helgen’s kitchen. Getting tanked on found wine is a very Skyrim experience. Uh oh, some sort of blood ritual? Yikes! My uneasiness about Siouxie is turning into alarm bells! I’ve had an idea about that old man with his dog. That guy is known for unexpected consequences of his deals with mortals.

And there’s another dog sighting. I don’t think that’s just some random mutt!

The Falkreath meeting is a really big deal. I like how Laprima chatted with the locals to gain information. Interesting difference in loyalties between the Jarl and the former Jarl. I wonder if Laprima can use that to her advantage. Also I’m jealous of her ability to lie down and just go to sleep.

And I’m up to date! It has been a lot of fun to binge LPD episodes while catching up with her story. Looking forward to season 5!





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