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When the dream began, she found herself lying in a cart, lying in hay, lying still, half-hiding from the others. Part of her wanted to be out there with them, while another part felt quietly content to stay right there. Right in that haypile. Staying still, and keeping quiet. It's this latter, secondary part which attained.

The scene was heavily pastoral. Lots of trees, green with foliage. Sunlight and blue skies. A few puffy clouds, a perfect sort of day. The sounds of others around her. The cart she was in had been drawn off to the side, placed in shadow. The horse which had brought it here must have been tethered somewhere else. As she lay in the cart, she began to feel rather lonely. Sad, and lonely, despite the others cavorting nearby.

They were there for her. All of them, gaily awaiting her presence. Dressed in finery. The women wearing whites, pinks, and light blues. Maids and maidens. The men, dressed more somberly, but the sounds from their revelries were no less delighted and cheerful.

Where is she? Where is Laprima?

Someone was calling. A man, sounding a bit tipsy with wine, perhaps. Yet his voice contained an edge of concern. And then, the voice of one of the ladies...

We should go find her! She's probably near! She's going to miss out!

She sank lower, hiding within hay. She could hear them coming, getting nearer, occasionally calling out to her. She cowered. Not with fear, but with some sort of distress. Lonely she was, and part of her did want to join the others.

She scrunched within the hay as footsteps approached and circled the cart. She held her breath. Eventually, the footsteps moved on. Small relief; she exhaled. They hadn't discovered her. So she took a chance. Got situated upon her arms, and raised her head about a foot, attempting to peer over the cart's side. As she did so, she noticed there was a knot in its wooden planking. For no reason at all (other than, this is a dream, and in dreams we sometimes do strange things) she pushed upon this knot, and the knot fell out, leaving a hole. She squinted her left eye, viewing outside of the cart, only to see vague shapes of the departing couple, heading off into a cabin. Still calling out, still calling her name.

...And that's when she noticed the man with the dog.
...He stood off to the side of the meadow, nearer to the woods.
...He stood in shadow. He wore a jerkin of white and black. He beckoned to her.

You there! I can see you, he said quietly. Despite using a soft tone, she could hear his voice clearly, in the surreal way which dreams can magnify. I can see you, and I mean no harm. Why do not you approach me?

She felt a stab of fear. How can he view me, hiding within this cart? But then, she relaxed. For the man was merely a boy. A boy she recognized from her youth. And this boy was her brother.

Laprima! he called. Come hither, posthaste!

And so she did.

She rose from the cart, took a moment to brush stray strands of hay from her clothings, and then ran swiftly toward her brother, skirts ruffling below. She noticed that the dog which had been there a moment ago had vacated, or vanished. She looked to her brother as she drew nearer. And her brother smiled up at her in his typically mischievous way. A smile she hadn't seen since they were, in fact, both children. Her previous feelings of loneliness were gone.

You should depart! her brother said to her, dancing around her with gaited elan. Head on! Depart hence toward Solitude! And do as they say! ... These folks you see in their fabled costumes, all of them here, are of nothing to you! ... To us! .. They mean nothing! ... A wretched lot! ... So onwards must you go! ... Your man, he awaits your presence! And you shall be in high company! Just dandy! Just peachy!

She felt elation at his words. Her brother, right there before her. 'Whatever is to come, would be fine,' he was telling her, seemingly tapping within her thoughts, her hopes, her fears.

Elija, she said to him.

Yes, sister!

She was weeping by now.

Her hands raised to embrace him. But just then, a flash of emotion overcame her. A mixture of revolting sickness, and sweet delight. She recoiled, stumbled backwards in disgust...

Laprima Donnaugh awoke, bolt upright, her eyes teary. Her bed quarters around her, her 8 year-old feline dozing by her side. She'd just had a dream. Her thoughts were racing, so she consciously made an effort to remember all she could. ... Her brother .... A cart ... Some people walking by in gay costume ... A dog by the side of the forest ... Slowly, she pieced it all together. After a minute or so, she sat up in bed, inked her quill and began to scribble words quickly in her journal.

After she had recalled all she could, she realized she was in agreement with her brother. She would head to Solitude.

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Renee   The Saga of Laprima Donnaugh   Nov 22 2020, 04:41 PM
Acadian   The drums of war! That will certainly put her...   Feb 3 2024, 09:20 PM
WellTemperedClavier   So Chamany's in jail. Well, if it's any co...   Feb 9 2024, 04:19 AM
Renee   I do comments tonight. Tomorrow morning I post the...   Feb 10 2024, 04:00 AM
Renee   . ___________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Zenitha...   Feb 10 2024, 03:12 PM
Acadian   It seems Elisef is wise enough to insist on not kn...   Feb 11 2024, 01:03 AM
SubRosa   Sounds like some Risky business here. A large ra...   Feb 11 2024, 03:24 PM
Renee   Hello [u]Acadian. :salute: I actually think Elisif...   Feb 17 2024, 08:26 PM
Renee   . ______________________________ .[font=Book Anti...   Feb 17 2024, 11:04 PM
SubRosa   Laprima had a dream about taking the subway, which...   Feb 18 2024, 12:30 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Somehow didn't see these updates! Sorry...   Feb 19 2024, 05:24 AM
macole   I hope it's not a Dragonborn. The way the two ...   Feb 19 2024, 06:03 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Sounds like a classic anxiety dream that Laprima h...   Feb 20 2024, 04:34 AM
Acadian   Paige is another fun castle kid! By ‘biscui...   Feb 21 2024, 05:29 PM
Renee   Look at this, 4:48 in the morning. ⌚ Wish I coul...   Feb 24 2024, 12:01 PM
Renee   . _______________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]A S...   Feb 24 2024, 01:57 PM
SubRosa   Welcome to life on the roads of Skyrim! :D ...   Feb 24 2024, 05:49 PM
Acadian   Great advice from Laprima’s guardsmen. Aim cent...   Feb 24 2024, 09:26 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Notifications are a mixed blessing. On the one han...   Feb 29 2024, 06:04 AM
macole   Typical veteran guard reaction. "Tis but a sc...   Feb 29 2024, 07:32 AM
Renee   This week was a stressful one, so that today's...   Mar 2 2024, 11:34 AM
Renee   . _________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Dragon Br...   Mar 2 2024, 02:22 PM
SubRosa   Dragon Bridge is hardly a fortified position. Thou...   Mar 2 2024, 08:05 PM
Acadian   Nice that Lady Donnaugh’s delegation finds the v...   Mar 2 2024, 09:26 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Glad Emma's is working out! And sorry for ...   Mar 6 2024, 04:05 AM
Renee   Gonna reply comments tonight. Story tomorrow. Stil...   Mar 9 2024, 03:41 AM
Renee   . __________________________ [font=Book Antiqua]...   Mar 10 2024, 11:31 AM
Acadian   And it’s off to Solitude with her pair of guards...   Mar 10 2024, 08:11 PM
SubRosa   Will the True Nords please stand up. Well, here th...   Mar 10 2024, 11:07 PM
macole   Finnish and Norwegian for the giantess, nice touch...   Mar 11 2024, 04:52 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Oh, neat! Yeah, it's cool that TES lets yo...   Mar 13 2024, 03:03 AM
Renee   Hey, looks like we've got a new story in Fan F...   Mar 17 2024, 04:17 PM
Renee   . _________________ [font=Book Antiqua]Jill of al...   Mar 17 2024, 07:11 PM
Acadian   So the barmaid and young mystic archer enjoys a st...   Mar 17 2024, 11:56 PM
SubRosa   So it is back to ordinary life for Laprima, with s...   Mar 18 2024, 01:32 AM
Renee   Hey, we all make mistakes, but I made a whole slew...   Mar 18 2024, 01:46 AM
macole   Renee: A well-reasoned approach to selecting a sch...   Mar 19 2024, 08:06 AM
Renee   True, 'Rosa. I forgot we can block with bows. ...   Mar 23 2024, 12:41 PM
Renee   . ___________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]An Od...   Mar 23 2024, 01:35 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Sorry for the late response! The fact that th...   Mar 24 2024, 04:13 AM
SubRosa   I love Laprima's observation on how pearl-clut...   Mar 24 2024, 09:28 PM
Acadian   Well, this next ambassadorial tour sounds much mor...   Mar 25 2024, 12:20 AM
Renee   Hola amigos, getting a late start this weekend. Ho...   Apr 1 2024, 02:30 AM
Renee   . ________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]One For Al...   Apr 1 2024, 03:27 AM
Acadian   What an interesting little band Laprima has in her...   Apr 2 2024, 12:19 AM
macole   Interesting how TÃ¥rn figured out who was in comma...   Apr 2 2024, 04:01 PM
SubRosa   Laprima had a dream in which she was watching tele...   Apr 2 2024, 10:09 PM
Renee   The odd thing about Maryland. We barely had a wint...   Apr 6 2024, 01:37 PM
macole   The odd thing about Maryland. We barely had a win...   Apr 7 2024, 08:05 AM
Renee   . ________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Gang of Fi...   Apr 6 2024, 02:36 PM
macole   . "Well, there it is," Sixpenny said qu...   Apr 7 2024, 10:21 PM
SubRosa   Party Of Five. Laprima will be played by Jennifer ...   Apr 7 2024, 12:18 AM
Acadian   Three soldiers, one mage, one . . . Tarn and one a...   Apr 7 2024, 08:24 PM
Renee   Posting early this week. :) Yesterday I had the da...   Apr 12 2024, 05:05 PM
Renee   . __________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Robberâ...   Apr 13 2024, 03:39 PM
Acadian   Well-done, Renee! This was a really good figh...   Apr 14 2024, 12:21 AM
SubRosa   Some of that fancy schoolin' that Lady Donnaug...   Apr 15 2024, 03:18 AM
macole   Sorry to hear about Mansonn.   Apr 18 2024, 05:02 PM
Renee   After conversing with Acadian a bit we've dete...   Apr 20 2024, 04:05 PM
Renee   . _____________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Rorikstead ...   Apr 20 2024, 05:18 PM
Acadian   Good thinking on Laprima’s part to try and elimi...   Apr 21 2024, 08:33 PM
SubRosa   At least they were able to find Mansonn and give h...   Apr 23 2024, 11:27 PM
Renee   @Acadian: See, that's an example of the way I ...   Apr 27 2024, 11:59 AM
Renee   . ___________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Sir Rorik __...   Apr 27 2024, 12:21 PM
Acadian   I love how you shared Ambassador Laprima’s caref...   Apr 28 2024, 12:10 AM
SubRosa   It is neat to see Rorik's place, his stead if ...   Apr 28 2024, 12:54 AM
macole   There is much to like about this chapter. How Lapr...   Apr 28 2024, 07:28 AM
Renee   This shall be the final Saga of Laprima chapter fo...   May 4 2024, 02:50 PM
Acadian   Yup, put LPD in the fridge so she doesn't melt...   May 4 2024, 07:36 PM
Renee   . ___________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Sixpen...   May 4 2024, 07:40 PM
SubRosa   Wow, Tarn is a biggun! She reminds me of Karla...   May 5 2024, 12:48 AM
macole   Ah, my thought of Sixpenny being a double agent di...   May 5 2024, 05:18 AM
Acadian   Very neat how you wove Laprima’s thoughts throug...   May 5 2024, 08:27 PM
Renee   Soon begins Season Four of the Saga of Laprima Don...   Feb 5 2025, 07:50 PM
macole   Recap accomplished; I am ready to proceed.   Feb 6 2025, 04:36 AM
Lena Wolf   With the PC fixed and SKSE obeying orders again......   Feb 7 2025, 02:03 AM
Renee   I am ready too, macole. :cake: As Lena indicates...   Feb 9 2025, 02:16 PM
Renee   . _________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]The Mead ...   Feb 9 2025, 06:11 PM
SubRosa   Laprima is back! I see she is still out on the...   Feb 9 2025, 08:26 PM
Acadian   Welcome back for another season of Laprima! ...   Feb 9 2025, 09:41 PM
Lopov   I'm glad that you didn't return to Laprima...   Feb 11 2025, 02:10 PM
Lena Wolf   So, if Fort Greymoor used to be Black Moor in the ...   Feb 12 2025, 08:34 PM
Renee   3:15 in the morning. Can't sleep, so might as ...   Feb 16 2025, 10:15 AM
Renee   . ____________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Whiterun ___...   Feb 16 2025, 07:44 PM
Lopov   So much work to get proper clothing, even in size,...   Feb 16 2025, 08:18 PM
Acadian   Laprima’s a milk drinker! It’s too bad ...   Feb 16 2025, 09:42 PM
Lena Wolf   Funny thing, Lena actually liked Belethor... The f...   Feb 16 2025, 10:33 PM
SubRosa   Emperor Titus Mead I think the emperor might have ...   Feb 16 2025, 10:56 PM
Renee   Emperor Titus Mead I'm so sorry. Yeah, that...   Feb 17 2025, 03:32 AM
SubRosa   [quote name='SubRosa' post='360169' date='Feb 16 ...   Feb 17 2025, 10:33 PM
Lopov   Maybe next time Laprima would have more luck findi...   Feb 17 2025, 01:18 PM
Renee   Hey, maybe that's how Van Hagar thinks Mede sp...   Feb 23 2025, 09:40 AM
Renee   . ___________________ .[font=Book Antiqua] Elisif...   Feb 23 2025, 12:01 PM
Acadian   A most welcome update from a remote perspective as...   Feb 23 2025, 04:10 PM
Lena Wolf   Wow! I didn't realise that Jarl Elisif pr...   Feb 23 2025, 06:36 PM
SubRosa   So it is a council of the bosses back in Solitude....   Feb 24 2025, 10:43 PM
Lopov   It's a unique episode because Laprima is a men...   Feb 25 2025, 07:38 PM
macole   Just one question; how often does Tullius object? ...   Feb 25 2025, 10:52 PM
Renee   I am three weeks ahead of the story so far as writ...   Mar 1 2025, 05:26 AM
Renee   . ______________ .[font=Book Antiqua] Riverwood ...   Mar 1 2025, 07:03 PM
Acadian   An ominous opening involving unseen forces. Nice ...   Mar 1 2025, 09:47 PM
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