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When the dream began, she found herself lying in a cart, lying in hay, lying still, half-hiding from the others. Part of her wanted to be out there with them, while another part felt quietly content to stay right there. Right in that haypile. Staying still, and keeping quiet. It's this latter, secondary part which attained.

The scene was heavily pastoral. Lots of trees, green with foliage. Sunlight and blue skies. A few puffy clouds, a perfect sort of day. The sounds of others around her. The cart she was in had been drawn off to the side, placed in shadow. The horse which had brought it here must have been tethered somewhere else. As she lay in the cart, she began to feel rather lonely. Sad, and lonely, despite the others cavorting nearby.

They were there for her. All of them, gaily awaiting her presence. Dressed in finery. The women wearing whites, pinks, and light blues. Maids and maidens. The men, dressed more somberly, but the sounds from their revelries were no less delighted and cheerful.

Where is she? Where is Laprima?

Someone was calling. A man, sounding a bit tipsy with wine, perhaps. Yet his voice contained an edge of concern. And then, the voice of one of the ladies...

We should go find her! She's probably near! She's going to miss out!

She sank lower, hiding within hay. She could hear them coming, getting nearer, occasionally calling out to her. She cowered. Not with fear, but with some sort of distress. Lonely she was, and part of her did want to join the others.

She scrunched within the hay as footsteps approached and circled the cart. She held her breath. Eventually, the footsteps moved on. Small relief; she exhaled. They hadn't discovered her. So she took a chance. Got situated upon her arms, and raised her head about a foot, attempting to peer over the cart's side. As she did so, she noticed there was a knot in its wooden planking. For no reason at all (other than, this is a dream, and in dreams we sometimes do strange things) she pushed upon this knot, and the knot fell out, leaving a hole. She squinted her left eye, viewing outside of the cart, only to see vague shapes of the departing couple, heading off into a cabin. Still calling out, still calling her name.

...And that's when she noticed the man with the dog.
...He stood off to the side of the meadow, nearer to the woods.
...He stood in shadow. He wore a jerkin of white and black. He beckoned to her.

You there! I can see you, he said quietly. Despite using a soft tone, she could hear his voice clearly, in the surreal way which dreams can magnify. I can see you, and I mean no harm. Why do not you approach me?

She felt a stab of fear. How can he view me, hiding within this cart? But then, she relaxed. For the man was merely a boy. A boy she recognized from her youth. And this boy was her brother.

Laprima! he called. Come hither, posthaste!

And so she did.

She rose from the cart, took a moment to brush stray strands of hay from her clothings, and then ran swiftly toward her brother, skirts ruffling below. She noticed that the dog which had been there a moment ago had vacated, or vanished. She looked to her brother as she drew nearer. And her brother smiled up at her in his typically mischievous way. A smile she hadn't seen since they were, in fact, both children. Her previous feelings of loneliness were gone.

You should depart! her brother said to her, dancing around her with gaited elan. Head on! Depart hence toward Solitude! And do as they say! ... These folks you see in their fabled costumes, all of them here, are of nothing to you! ... To us! .. They mean nothing! ... A wretched lot! ... So onwards must you go! ... Your man, he awaits your presence! And you shall be in high company! Just dandy! Just peachy!

She felt elation at his words. Her brother, right there before her. 'Whatever is to come, would be fine,' he was telling her, seemingly tapping within her thoughts, her hopes, her fears.

Elija, she said to him.

Yes, sister!

She was weeping by now.

Her hands raised to embrace him. But just then, a flash of emotion overcame her. A mixture of revolting sickness, and sweet delight. She recoiled, stumbled backwards in disgust...

Laprima Donnaugh awoke, bolt upright, her eyes teary. Her bed quarters around her, her 8 year-old feline dozing by her side. She'd just had a dream. Her thoughts were racing, so she consciously made an effort to remember all she could. ... Her brother .... A cart ... Some people walking by in gay costume ... A dog by the side of the forest ... Slowly, she pieced it all together. After a minute or so, she sat up in bed, inked her quill and began to scribble words quickly in her journal.

After she had recalled all she could, she realized she was in agreement with her brother. She would head to Solitude.

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Renee   The Saga of Laprima Donnaugh   Nov 22 2020, 04:41 PM
Lopov   Some phrases from the intro sound familiar, were t...   Mar 1 2025, 10:00 PM
SubRosa   That was certainly a foreboding prologue to today...   Mar 2 2025, 10:01 PM
macole   A frivolous mistake that’s not so frivolous, hmm...   Mar 3 2025, 03:19 AM
Kane   All caught up with this, Renee - I love reading th...   Mar 5 2025, 02:35 PM
Renee   Alright folks, time for comments. :cake: Really am...   Mar 8 2025, 02:34 AM
Renee   . __________ .[font=Book Antiqua] Siouxie ______...   Mar 8 2025, 06:36 AM
Acadian   Ahah! So Siouxie wins the contest of the myst...   Mar 8 2025, 09:34 PM
macole   Oh dear, oh dear, Siouxie better know what she is ...   Mar 8 2025, 10:13 PM
SubRosa   So it is Siouxie and the Banshees. That is cool. I...   Mar 10 2025, 09:30 PM
Lopov   So I was right that it's Siouxie! Now wher...   Mar 11 2025, 02:01 PM
Kane   Ooh, I think I'm going to like Siouxie. Curiou...   Mar 11 2025, 02:39 PM
Renee   Gosh, March is half-over already. 🍀 @Kane: Fu...   Mar 16 2025, 01:16 PM
Renee   . _______________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]The...   Mar 16 2025, 05:50 PM
Acadian   A surprisingly good night of sleep followed by an ...   Mar 16 2025, 08:40 PM
macole   Ok, now I'm really starting to get spooked. La...   Mar 18 2025, 06:20 AM
Lopov   Uh oh, so there's a woman (a matron) that only...   Mar 18 2025, 11:15 AM
SubRosa   A long night's sleep, a cleansing bath, and pr...   Mar 18 2025, 05:48 PM
Kane   That certainly is one foreboding manor! :O   Mar 21 2025, 06:39 PM
Renee   [color=#3333FF]@Acadian: Oh yeah, now that their c...   Mar 23 2025, 02:34 AM
Renee   . ____________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Becoming ___...   Mar 23 2025, 05:55 AM
Acadian   So ‘Prima and the Banshee discover how Mysteriou...   Mar 23 2025, 08:24 PM
SubRosa   I am delighted that you chose to use my Crow Home ...   Mar 24 2025, 08:39 PM
Lopov   This story is getting better and better with each ...   Mar 25 2025, 07:57 AM
Kane   What a delightfully spooky experience! I can...   Mar 27 2025, 05:37 PM
macole   Such a lovely house when it decides to show itself...   Mar 28 2025, 08:53 PM
Renee   Thanks much. It's loosely based on the room ...   Mar 29 2025, 02:22 AM
Renee   . ________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Helgen, Ra...   Mar 30 2025, 03:39 AM
Lopov   I have a feeling that Laprima quite enjoyed the co...   Mar 30 2025, 03:53 PM
Acadian   Filling up those coin purses via alchemy was a wis...   Mar 30 2025, 08:39 PM
Kane   Oh, boy. So miss Siouxie has been holding back...   Mar 31 2025, 06:40 PM
SubRosa   It is a good observation that while Nords have an ...   Mar 31 2025, 09:02 PM
macole   Uh oh, what kind of deal? I'll just have to wa...   Apr 1 2025, 04:42 AM
Renee   Hola amigas y amigos, today's story's gonn...   Apr 5 2025, 03:19 PM
Renee   . ____________ .[font=Book Antiqua]The Pact ___...   Apr 6 2025, 05:57 AM
Lopov   What a creepy pic at the end. :| Another cliff-...   Apr 6 2025, 10:06 AM
Acadian   Very spooky and foreboding stuff as the two ladies...   Apr 6 2025, 07:46 PM
SubRosa   Siouxie reminds me of Grandpa Simpson, in the way ...   Apr 7 2025, 08:59 PM
Renee   Lopov: Yes, creepy picture in the link. The animat...   Apr 13 2025, 05:49 PM
Lopov   I had this bug too and it wasn't related to an...   Apr 13 2025, 06:40 PM
Renee   . ____________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Falkreath __...   Apr 13 2025, 07:53 PM
Acadian   Siouxie the Banshee and any mysterious dogs will j...   Apr 14 2025, 12:04 AM
SubRosa   The presence of that dog on the edge of Falkreath ...   Apr 14 2025, 08:46 PM
Kane   Laprima setting aside the prior shenanigans to sus...   Apr 15 2025, 01:20 AM
Lopov   I have a feeling that Siouxie (or her deeds) are a...   Apr 16 2025, 05:34 PM
Renee   This is gonna be the final chapter of season four....   Apr 20 2025, 02:05 AM
Renee   . ______________________ .[font=Book Antiqua]Dead...   Apr 20 2025, 02:36 AM
Acadian   So arrives the end of another season of Laprima Do...   Apr 20 2025, 04:17 PM
SubRosa   I don't think Henry V did the dress as a peasa...   Apr 20 2025, 08:43 PM
Kane   Laprima's sleeping habits remind me of my own....   Apr 21 2025, 11:37 PM
Lopov   A nice and short ending for the season that actual...   Apr 25 2025, 08:52 PM
Winter Wolf   It is going to take time for me to catch up to spe...   Apr 27 2025, 12:21 AM
Renee   Acadian: thanks! Next season shall return in D...   Apr 28 2025, 06:12 PM
macole   Looking forward to December.   May 6 2025, 05:08 AM
Grits   I have just finished Season 3 and Sixpenny’s bet...   May 9 2025, 04:13 PM
Grits   Gosh, Siouxie has a lot of influence on Laprima. T...   May 9 2025, 07:01 PM
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