1. Reunion – great tension, emotion and characterisation. Great story.
2. In the Heart of the Alik'r – great story, well described, but suffers from a lacklustre ending.
3. Butterfly – beautiful dialogue, but lacking in description and ending a let down.
4. The Fateful night – second half very interesting but too much internal character's thoughts in the first half.
5. The Mistake – interesting premise but not enough description.
6. A Knife In The Dark – interesting presmise, well described but extremely predictable betrayal. Shame, could have been great.
7. Lady of The Night – interesting premise but no description and too much dialogue, half a story.
8. This Mind: Now Under New Management – some interesting description but no plot or point. Some people have really clicked with this I see, but sadly it did nothing for me. Sorry
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