Ooh, I luuurve Master Relas in this! He is just as I imagined him!
Wonder what it was Rhano saw on his way out to make him so untalkative? Not a good thing, I suppose.
If you've been having hot and dry weather there, no wonder you've been writing about seaside adventures! For me the antidote for that kind of weather is to write about mountains, cold and snow. Works every time! Of course, when it's dark and freezing cold outside in the middle of January, I love to write about warm seaside places! Like Anvil.
Jerric's determination to be the first face Rhano sees is admirable, though by that point I imagine Rhano would be happy to see
any friendly face.
Well done!