A Brighter Future?, The story of Tara Willow. Options

[Tábrasa]

Hello! I'll start by introducing myself.

My name is Tábrasa and I'm new to the forums. I've been silently looking at some of the stories on the forums and have felt truly inspired.
Therefore I have decided to start the story of my Breton Wiccan, Tara Willow, who I've been travelling with for the past year. Below is an introduction to Tara, which will soon be followed by the Prologue...

INTRODUCTION TO TARA WILLOW

Tara Willow is a 20 year old female Breton born on the 14th of Rain's Hand, 3E 413.

She is primarily a Conjurer but also dabbles in Destruction and Illusion. She is also handy with a blade in certain situations.

Her father died when she was a teenager and her mother resides somewhere in Cyrodiil, under a new name following events in High Rock that led her to abandon Tara as an infant.

Tara's father was a man obsessed with the art of Mysticism; but in the wrong kind of way. He wanted to experiment the thought of finding a way to turn the human body itself into a soul gem; an experment not only ridiculed, but dangerous.

One day, however, he managed to succeed in his experiment; using a teenage Tara as his unwilling test subject. He managed to trap a spirit withing Tara's body, leaving her in an unusual state.

Tara now has to permanantly live with an extra spirit inside her, who she named Willow, after her surname.
Willow is able to communicate with Tara and take control of her body for brief periods; but only when Tara desperatly need's her assistance. However, Willow's possesions are almost NEVER a good thing.

Currently Tara is on a mission to find her mother, mainly for her own piece of mind. All she knows is that she is in Cyrodiil, but nothing else. The only thing she has to offer any aid in her quest is the memory of her mothers face...

This post has been edited by Tábrasa: Dec 12 2011, 01:17 AM

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She could see Willow’s image in the window, which made taking off her bra rather uncomfortable. She decided to take her Bra off under her blouse, leading to an awkward moment of trying to undo the knot with minimal room to even move. She couldn’t quite reach, leading to an even more awkward motion of trying to move the bra around so the knot at the back would be at the front, which, again, her having her blouse on for privacy made ever more difficult.

She looked in her reflection and could see Willow giggling at her actions.

SPEW !!! ROFL !! I could picture this whole scene, this had me rolling !! These kind of details totally make your story, I love them !!!

She desperately wanted to say something, but she couldn’t understand why she wouldn’t.

...It made her feel sick that she had to lie to avoid confrontation,

I love these lines, they show how fragile Tara really is inside.


URK !!! Looks like "Watch her closely when she turns 19" has a meaning now.


Poor Tara, and BRILLIANT plot !!!! Love how you've thought this out !!!

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