Aww, an adorable chick episode! Complete with discussion of feminism, social/gender roles and limitations of said roles (which I find frustrating IRL, now that I have a nephew and a coworker who are trans and are both wonderful people), and ending with hair and makeup. Just the right touch of everything!
I did notice one tiny nit -
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"Ravenward," Hrafngoelir said proudly. "Hetha said it would protect me from harmful magics. So far, it is saved my life more than once. But how did you know it's name?"
Just wanted to remind you that the possessive form of
it does not earn an apostrophe.
I continue to enjoy this story, and the hints and foreshadowing and world building that is going on here. I remember the original
Seven as well as both the
Seven Samurai and
The Magnificent Seven and look forward to how our young, brash Teodon integrates himself into this group.