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minque
post Jul 15 2005, 12:06 AM
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Dantrag
post Jul 15 2005, 05:02 AM
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OOC: looks good to me. Basically, the only bad things you could do in a post are control/kill/dismember another person's character and/or post in something other than past tense. You did neither, so it's okay biggrin.gif



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post Jul 15 2005, 03:03 PM
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QUOTE(Dantrag @ Jul 15 2005, 05:02 AM)
OOC: looks good to me. Basically, the only bad things you could do in a post are control/kill/dismember another person's character and/or post in something other than past tense. You did neither, so it's okay  biggrin.gif
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(ooc:'k thanks one question, why do things have to be in past tense??)

When Otik woke up he knew he had to move and find more food. HE got up and wandered around the Ashlands wondering what to eat and then he found it, an Alit. one arrow and the beast was down. He thought that this was curios to ohly see one Alit but his hunger overwelmed his sence to stay put. as he was butchering the alit he heard a grunt and turned just to see an alit bite at him. It was to close for his bow so he desperately slashed at it with his dagger, a slash here, a jab here, and eventually he felled the beast. He then cooked his meat along with some other plants he found around and opened a bottle of flin.

after his meal he used a potion and then he continued his journy east for some unknown reason. everntually he came across a deadric shrine, a place of great evil and power. Otik never did like these places, parents from his village anlways told there children stories of these places to make sure that they didn't run off in the middle of the night and get eaten by dremoras, or worse be sacrafices. He shivered as he walked by and wondered if he couold find some dremora to kill so he decided that he would climb a pillar and watch for them to come out.

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minque   A Mystery Unleashed Playground 24   Jul 15 2005, 12:06 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   As Megil watched the mental battle between Niran a...   Jul 15 2005, 12:10 AM
gamer10   Niran nearly went crazy Stop it! Stop it...   Jul 15 2005, 12:11 AM
Dantrag   Sel saw the commmotion before Celia could answer. ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:13 AM
minque   NOOOO, Serene was whining......there was someone e...   Jul 15 2005, 12:14 AM
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gamer10   Niran's voice grew very commanding and he stoo...   Jul 15 2005, 12:15 AM
minque   Serene worked together with Megil in calling for A...   Jul 15 2005, 12:22 AM
BobV   As Anthanes was part-way through the ashlands, he ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:24 AM
gamer10   (OOC: Stendarr.) Niran rose from the ground and g...   Jul 15 2005, 12:29 AM
Dantrag   Sel stood, shocked. Why would a god care if Serene...   Jul 15 2005, 12:30 AM
Aki   Fenrir just sat there, watching. "This is wha...   Jul 15 2005, 12:31 AM
Dantrag   Sel looked over at Fenris. "Would you get...   Jul 15 2005, 12:35 AM
Aki   "She did try to mess with Niran's mind,...   Jul 15 2005, 12:51 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Megi felt Azura's presence, then he felt his b...   Jul 15 2005, 12:31 AM
minque   OOC: Good! Let Serene be severely hurt for a c...   Jul 15 2005, 12:33 AM
gamer10   Stendarr let go (that's right) "Good, you...   Jul 15 2005, 12:33 AM
BobV   Anthanes jumped up as the Ashlander gave a mighty ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:38 AM
ShogunSniper   ooc: this post shouldn't interfere Osano saw ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:39 AM
gamer10   Niran turned, his eyes wide "Killing her? I d...   Jul 15 2005, 12:44 AM
Dantrag   "So you're back." he said. He wasn...   Jul 15 2005, 12:45 AM
gamer10   Niran stood up, still recovering from his self inf...   Jul 15 2005, 12:49 AM
gamer10   "Are you serious," Niran asked Fenris.   Jul 15 2005, 12:52 AM
Dantrag   "there." Sel said, pointing to a yurt an...   Jul 15 2005, 12:52 AM
Aki   OOC: Got a better idea what to call it? :P   Jul 15 2005, 12:53 AM
gamer10   Niran lay her down, CPR? What the hell was that? ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:53 AM
MerGirl   (OOC: Do they even know how to use CPR, let alone ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:53 AM
ShogunSniper   He senced Arcyakt's presence. Osano was no ma...   Jul 15 2005, 12:54 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Megil came to shortly after, only to find Niran ba...   Jul 15 2005, 12:54 AM
gamer10   Niran stepped back and looked at Celia crying . . ...   Jul 15 2005, 12:55 AM
Channler   Falx readied the sword in his hand, "Any seco...   Jul 15 2005, 12:56 AM
Dantrag   OOC: this shouldn't conflict... [u]Mage [i]Y...   Jul 15 2005, 12:57 AM
minque   Serene was watching her body lying deeply unconsci...   Jul 15 2005, 01:00 AM
BobV   Anthanes continued maneuvering the small craft bet...   Jul 15 2005, 01:02 AM
Channler   "Bloody hell!" Falx was furious, ...   Jul 15 2005, 01:08 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Megil was uncertain of his theory, besides if he w...   Jul 15 2005, 01:12 AM
MerGirl   Celia blinked. She thought she could faintly hear ...   Jul 15 2005, 01:15 AM
gamer10   Outside Niran broke down, for the first time since...   Jul 15 2005, 01:15 AM
Dantrag   "Get a hold of yourself." Sel said. ...   Jul 15 2005, 01:15 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Megil looked at Celia. Hmm could work He then wa...   Jul 15 2005, 01:19 AM
gamer10   (OOC: Megil thinks it was Niran :O Well, let...   Jul 15 2005, 01:29 AM
MerGirl   Celia bit her lip, looking dismayed. "I'm...   Jul 15 2005, 01:33 AM
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gamer10   "Calm down, after I did that. I nearly killed...   Jul 15 2005, 01:34 AM
Dantrag   Sel didn't follow - he just stood outside the ...   Jul 15 2005, 01:44 AM
MerGirl   (OOC: So sorry! Got to go. Not sure if I'l...   Jul 15 2005, 01:45 AM
gamer10   Niran watched unable to do anything, except mutter...   Jul 15 2005, 01:47 AM
Soulseeker3.0   (ooc: ya yell at me if I do anything wrong lol) O...   Jul 15 2005, 04:12 AM
Wolfie   Jonacin stood silently in the back of the yurt, wa...   Jul 15 2005, 11:29 AM
BobV   Anthanes got up, wiping the sand from his face. He...   Jul 15 2005, 01:31 PM
minque   Sedrane spotted the stranger from the shadows when...   Jul 15 2005, 02:37 PM
Dantrag   OOC: minque...is Sedrane seeing ANthanes or Arcyak...   Jul 15 2005, 03:25 PM
BobV   ooc: Anthanes, I think. :P Anthanes entered the s...   Jul 15 2005, 04:19 PM
Dantrag   Mage "What do you want from this 'damnab...   Jul 15 2005, 04:45 PM
BobV   Anthanes turned around, smirking as he readied his...   Jul 15 2005, 04:47 PM
Dantrag   Mage "Now why would I give my enemy any sort...   Jul 15 2005, 04:50 PM
BobV   "I am not an enemy per se. I could care less ...   Jul 15 2005, 04:52 PM
Dantrag   "Hmmm...do something for me,, and I will cons...   Jul 15 2005, 04:58 PM
BobV   "I am already denying Boethiah...Ever since y...   Jul 15 2005, 04:59 PM
Dantrag   Mage Arcyakt smiled. that was the kind of answer ...   Jul 15 2005, 05:03 PM
BobV   Anthanes snarled. In an instant he grabbed his bow...   Jul 15 2005, 05:06 PM
Dantrag   Arcyakt turned and waved his hand, causing the arr...   Jul 15 2005, 05:10 PM
BobV   "Again. Give me my magicka back. Boethiah is ...   Jul 15 2005, 05:12 PM
Dantrag   "You hate that bastarde of a daedra, don...   Jul 15 2005, 05:13 PM
BobV   Anthanes grunted. His voice seemed full of disgust...   Jul 15 2005, 05:14 PM
Dantrag   "Fine." he said, releasing his spell on ...   Jul 15 2005, 05:17 PM
BobV   "Exxxxcelent." , Anthanes said. He then ...   Jul 15 2005, 05:18 PM
Soulseeker3.0   after wating for a couple hours Otik had killed 3 ...   Jul 15 2005, 07:24 PM
Dantrag   Sel noticed the breton leaning against the yurt. ...   Jul 15 2005, 10:01 PM
gamer10   Niran exited the yurt, and found a strange man lea...   Jul 15 2005, 10:39 PM
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gamer10   "A lot." was all Niran said, not trustin...   Jul 15 2005, 10:50 PM
Soulseeker3.0   "Heh well I was curious because it sounded li...   Jul 15 2005, 10:55 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Megil stepped outside, to tell the others of Seren...   Jul 15 2005, 10:57 PM
Dantrag   OOC: Since I'm leaving tonight, I'm going ...   Jul 15 2005, 11:01 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Otik just stood there shocked by this man's bl...   Jul 15 2005, 11:08 PM
gamer10   Niran turned to Megil "How's Serene doin...   Jul 15 2005, 11:14 PM
Dantrag   OOC: beach   Jul 15 2005, 11:15 PM
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MerGirl   Celia's head throbbed as always whenever she u...   Jul 16 2005, 12:30 AM
gamer10   Niran had come back in silently, leaning against p...   Jul 16 2005, 12:41 AM
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Dantrag   OOC: lame, I know, but he has to leave. See you gu...   Jul 16 2005, 12:56 AM
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Megil Tel-Zeke   OOC: No idea. Megil isn't acquainted with this...   Jul 16 2005, 01:53 AM
MerGirl   Celia's shoulders tightened when she heard Nir...   Jul 16 2005, 02:04 AM
Wolfie   Jonacin looked up as Niran entered the tent. ...   Jul 16 2005, 02:11 AM
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