Oooo, did I notice a mention of Simion? Cool!
Another excellent update Black! The interaction with Sethyas and Rayne was both intriguing and amusing.
The conversation with Sethyas and Dren was also really good; I wasn't expecting that. I guess I was thinking he was going to be more fire and brimstone due to the estrangement between his daughter and Sethyas, but the way you did it worked effectively.
I await the next update.
Reading your updates always makes me want to go off and write an update of my own, but then I remember the ton of chemistry homework I have to do. Then I sigh and wish it was Saturday so I could write.
This post has been edited by The Metal Mallet: Oct 11 2006, 07:34 PM
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