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Lady Saga
post Apr 5 2012, 03:42 PM
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Good day fellow Chorrolmates. I am Lady Saga, and today I'd like to talk about the saga of Ann Thraxx.

I originally posted all of the text of posts 1 and 2 over at Bethsoft's Oblivion: general area. Forgive the crudeness of some of the early text, for I was not originally writing Ann's tale as a true story yet. In Post #2, this starts to change. Post 1's text was originally in the Where are you Now #7 thread, and Post 2's text came from my own thread in OB: General.

This character is probably my deepest Oblivion roleplay to date. Originally I wanted her to be "Renee Gade III", which means she'd be some sort of heroic figure. But as Ann Thraxx evolved, it was apparent she's going to have a story much different from what I had originally conceived.

Although I'm on PS3, I performed a couple little tricks which I like to call pretend-mods. tongue.gif I used another character's game save, so that Ann never had to go thru the Tutorial part, then I fast-traveled her to just outside the Imperial City...Chestnut Handy Stables, to be exact. I had no idea why her game started here, though. That was not made known to me, yet. I also didn't know who Ann was, exactly. All of this becomes apparent during the massive text below.


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Name: Ann Thraxx


Race: Imperial

Sex: female.

Class: peasant (custom).

Starsign: Atronach

D&D alignment: Chaotic Neutral


Ann Thraxx the wayward peasant has just arrived at Chestnut Handy Stables outside the Imperial City. She arrived here by carriage, and it is nighttime...dark and rainy. She's wearing nothing but one of those horrible Cyrodiilic bras and some sack cloth pants. No shoes, no shirt.

Ann has heard there's a place to stay in "some house on the Waterfront" * so she's walking there now.

* I think there's a free bed in one of the houses on the Waterfront. if there is, no problem. A "friend" told Ann there's a place she can stay. But if there is no free bed, Ann will have no place to stay.


Her family is no more, and she is sad. I'm thinking she was a farmer of some sort, perhaps, and lost her farm. Her husband got killed perhaps, and Ann is right now in serious depression, serious culture shock. She's been to the I.C. before, but never actually lived here. She's used to the wide open plains of the West Weald.

She is poor, but she is also fortunate to have 58 gold in her pocket, along with a soul gem and a few minor things which can be sold. How she got all this stuff? We shall find out, won't we?

Ann Thraxx arrived at the Abandoned Shack, which is anything but abandoned! It was about 6am Cyrodiilic time, and Hillod the Outlaw and a dark elf male (forget his name) immediately rose as Ann walked in the door. Oops...

"Please, I didn't mean to startle you" she said to the dark elf. "I am Ann Thraxx. I have been sent here and was told I could spend the night. I've lost my home and my family..."

What was interesting was the dark elf's greeting had something to do with losing his job or being out of work or something. This fit right in, so that Ann and the dark elf had a short conversation about finding work.

The situation in the Abandoned Shack was awkward as the 2 males stood around staring at Ann. This isn't what she expected! Ann "got to know" Hillod and dark elf, and gave them more than half of her 58 gold (she basically bribed him so she can stay in the Shack). But the guys wouldn't leave!

Ann took a short walk outside, deprived of sleep and getting dizzy. She found a couple beggar beds which were open, but there's no way she's gonna stoop that low.

Finally she made her way back to the Abandoned Shack. It's now 8 am and Hillod + the dark elf are both gone. Finally.

Ann sets off to sleep. When she wakes, she's going to see about looking for work in the Imperial City.

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post May 3 2012, 04:01 PM
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Thank you, thank you. Sorry about the last bit. I thought I'd have some time to write on that particular day. Alas, that was not to be the case. Happens sometimes. kvright.gif Anyways, let's get on with it today.

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Chapter IX


Heartfire 6, 3rd Era, Year 433, 1:18 am

"Look! There she is again! It is that home-less lady I saw earlier yesterday afternoon!"

The dark-haired one was now pointing towards a figure who looked to be combing through a barrel, apparently looking for items of interest.

"She prob'bly went through every barrel, crate, and sack as she looted! I'm betting there is not a single item or food-stuff in the public area of the Markets! She prob'bly sold them all, and ate the rest. No shame has she--"

"Poor thing. We should pool together our coins, may-hap. We certainly have plenty to help", says the red-haired one.

The dark-haired one now laughs cautiously, as if she has a certain respect for her partner, but can't resist a bit of the contrary. "Are ...you ...joking? She's able-bodied! Let her rise from her own boot-straps, like us."

The red-haired one turns to the dark-haired one, giving her a look that could freeze a fire elemental in its tracks.

"I am going to pretend now, that I did not hear you say that. We are strong. We have coin. It is our very duty to help'th if we can. And we can".

The dark-haired one now flips her hair upwards, rolling her eyes, obviously not in agreement with the red-haired one.


The two had recently escaped from the Sewers below the city. Well, not just 'escaped', they had also been freed from their shared prison cell, managed to scour their way through a long network of maze-like rooms, halls, and tunnels, and finally witnessed a series of events which would change both of their lives forever. Before all of this, both had met recently in the Imperial City, looking for adventure-type work, but instead being mistaken for a couple of outlaw ruffians. It was a mistake which had happened mostly because of their dress. Both had been wearing rough clothes as they entered the Imperial City, yet both also somehow had obvious coin in their pockets. Being outsiders, it was assumed this coin was stolen, and within no time, it was "time for the lock-up, then".

Forced to share a cell with just one bedroll, the red-haired one and the dark-haired one got to know each other easily, as a sarcastic dark elf berated them from across the hall in a seperate cell. Turns out, these two shared a few things in common. Because of this, they had made plans to further their careers together, once this whole "mistaken identity" thing was taken care of. Both were aspiring melee-types who favored 'swords & boards', both had a desire to seek out the Fighter's Guild (for both had the "stones for it"), and both were interested in doing good deeds.

...But now that these two were out of their cell and out of their prison sentences, it was becoming more and more obvious that they did, in fact, have some ideals which clashed. The dark-haired one, for instance, made it quickly known that she put herself first, and would be furthering her career mostly for her own satisfaction. It was apparent in the way she spoke and the way she carried herself. "Houses". "Gold". "Fame". "Fortune". Those were four words the dark-haired one used constantly as she spoke with the red-haired one.

The red-haired one, on the other hand, desired to do things for the better good of the peoples of Cyrodiil. She would not be putting herself first, in other words. Also, the red-haired one was a devout follower of The Nines, whereas the dark-haired one admitted she had never even prayed at a chapel altar. Finally, the dark-haired one showed an immediate interest in seeing the Arena after escaping the sewers ("We can bet! We can make money! Once we have upgraded our gear, we can even participate!"). The red-haired one scoffed at this. "Why? I don't need to prove me-self to the world for fame! For such triviality! Such a waste of talents!"

Both were supposed to be going off towards Chorrol to deliver a heavy, red Amulet which the Emperor himself (now deceased) had given them, and both still planned to do so, but the red-haired one was beginning to think that was (perhaps) where their travels together should possibly end.

After leaving the sewers, selling various wares which they had found down there, both needed a break before heading off to Chorrol. Hence, they were now spending a few days in the Imperial City before setting off.

"Come on, giveth me some coin. Pony up!" bullies the red-haired one rather angrily, nudging the dark-haired one with her elbow.

"I am not. She prob'ly found plenty as she looted, any-ways".

"It is our duty to assist! Do you not understand this? Do you not see? We are stronger than she. We can help. We must do so", the red-haired one explains, hoping to talk some sense to the dark-haired one. "She will prob'bly only need'th a single coin, any-ways".

"Oh, and let me guess. If we give her more than a single coin, she will be willing to tell us the latest rumors about town", the dark-haired one barks. "I will pass, thank you. I do not need to indulge myself. We do not owe the peoples of this Imperial City as such. Why, they do not even have a Fighter's Guild hall here! What 'rumor', then, could she possibly dispel that we do not already know?"

With this, the red-haired one goes now ignores the dark-haired one, and calls to the lady-figure as she closes up a final barrel.

"You! You there! Come hither!"

But the homeless lady apparently does not hear, and now steps off into a door.

"There. See. She is off to the Boarding House, then. Are you satisfied? She prob'ly has plenty of coin for a night's rest. Now come on!" orders the dark-haired one "Come, let us get some rest. What say you?"

"Well. Okay", says the red-haired one, with enough reluctance to show she meant it. "You win. THIS time".

"Merchant's Inn again? Or would you prefer we stay somewhere more up-scale? I hear the Tiber Septim Hotel in the Talos District has a nice suite with plenty of food", the dark-haired one tempts with a wink.

"Merchant's Inn. It is less of an expense".

"Fine. Let us be gone, then".

As the two now leave the Elven Gardens for the Markets, Ann walks into Luther Broad's, hoping the man will accept her gold for another night.
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Lady Saga   The story of Ann Thraxx   Apr 5 2012, 03:42 PM
Lady Saga   Man. so I don't know what it is, but this role...   Apr 5 2012, 03:51 PM
mALX   First off - love the name (Ann Thraxx). Immediate...   Apr 5 2012, 06:24 PM
Lady Saga   I thanketh thee. :) I am working on editing post 2...   Apr 5 2012, 06:32 PM
mALX   I thanketh thee. :) I am working on editing post ...   Apr 5 2012, 06:42 PM
Lady Saga   We are def connected to our characters in many in...   Apr 5 2012, 07:54 PM
mALX   We are def connected to our characters in many i...   Apr 5 2012, 08:01 PM
Lady Saga   okay thanks. I'll do more editing tomorrow. I ...   Apr 5 2012, 09:59 PM
Acadian   What a fun story! Although your character Gad...   Apr 6 2012, 01:19 AM
Lady Saga   What a fun story! Although your character Ga...   Apr 6 2012, 02:11 AM
Acadian   Two questions here I guess. Post length and frequ...   Apr 6 2012, 03:01 AM
Lady Saga   don't worry Acadian. I don't even have eno...   Apr 6 2012, 01:41 PM
Acadian   I agree, and very much apologize if I clumsily sou...   Apr 6 2012, 02:49 PM
King Coin   I'm getting more frustrated at the citizens of...   Apr 9 2012, 02:27 AM
Andrea   YEAAAAAHH!! A story I can read and follow ...   Apr 10 2012, 10:09 PM
Lady Saga   Cool Andrea! much appreciated! I have an a...   Apr 11 2012, 05:04 PM
SubRosa   Ann is back! Poor thing. :( I love how she c...   Apr 12 2012, 08:06 PM
Lady Saga   So now she has to decide: the sewer patrol (now t...   Apr 12 2012, 09:13 PM
Andrea   So now she has to decide: the sewer patrol (now t...   Apr 13 2012, 02:54 PM
Lady Saga   Hello to all, hale, healthy and whole. I am Lady S...   Apr 14 2012, 11:05 PM
Lady Saga   I don't know if I can double-post this or not....   Apr 14 2012, 11:54 PM
McBadgere   Brilliant, love all the conversations from the gam...   Apr 15 2012, 06:51 AM
Andrea   Chapter V: I absoloutly loved the dream sequence a...   Apr 15 2012, 09:20 PM
Acadian   Poor Ann is still suffering from reminders of the ...   Apr 16 2012, 12:16 AM
Grits   I think you can double-post in your story thread a...   Apr 16 2012, 11:30 AM
Lady Saga   I thank you all. Hee hee, I feel like I'm one ...   Apr 16 2012, 11:36 PM
Darkness Eternal   The Imperial City. Where innkeepers walk around wi...   Apr 17 2012, 12:09 AM
Lady Saga   @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @...   Apr 17 2012, 01:28 AM
SubRosa   I suggest you write everything in Word, Wordpad, o...   Apr 17 2012, 02:09 AM
Lady Saga   Thanks for the suggestions, SubRosa, and wait...   Apr 17 2012, 02:26 AM
Andrea   A short chapter, but still very good. There is alo...   Apr 17 2012, 02:31 AM
Acadian   ‘The story was in print, and therefore had to be t...   Apr 18 2012, 12:27 AM
ghastley   I think I managed to attempt reading this every ti...   Apr 18 2012, 03:01 AM
Lady Saga   Acadian: Exactly. Poor naive Ann Thraxx. She's...   Apr 18 2012, 04:03 AM
Andrea   I think it's pretty cool that I had no idea ...   Apr 20 2012, 03:44 PM
Lady Saga   I think it's pretty cool that I had no idea...   Apr 20 2012, 05:23 PM
Lady Saga   @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @-}-- @...   Apr 20 2012, 06:02 PM
Darkness Eternal   Are you having problems with your computer, Lady S...   Apr 20 2012, 10:02 PM
Lady-Mara-II   Loving it so far, particularly the conversations N...   Apr 24 2012, 11:23 PM
Glargg   I'm going to chime in here, too. I love that ...   Apr 25 2012, 07:24 PM
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Lady Saga   Heh heh...those who know me from Bethsoft over the...   May 3 2012, 04:33 PM
mALX   I enjoyed the flow and dialogue of this chapter, a...   May 3 2012, 06:10 PM
Acadian   A fun episode raising loads of questions. After...   May 4 2012, 12:03 AM
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