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post Nov 13 2006, 09:39 PM
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An excellent update. I am looking forward to seeing how our favorite councilman manages to defeat Venim within the strict rules he has been given.
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post Nov 14 2006, 02:06 AM
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post Nov 14 2006, 02:27 AM
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It was an honour and a priviledge to work on this update with you. Everything surrounding the fight was wonderfully written and build up the expectation of the fight amazingly well. And the ending was beautifully emotion. And Sethyas gets to the chance to get his freak on! Yea!!

Oh yea, and thanks for the plug as well! biggrin.gif And I see that the commentasaurus remark still lives! Awesome!


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post Nov 14 2006, 02:33 AM
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Woohoo! biggrin.gif *Claps enthusiasticly* Bravo MM! Very Nice work. That was truly an epic example of mortal combat. And Black Hand, you amde an excellant character for MM to make a fighting sequence for. *Cheering everywhere* It would seem that Seth has gotten his girlfriend back laugh.gif biggrin.gif
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post Nov 14 2006, 08:31 AM
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Best thing about your work is the frequent and incredibly long updates, seems like you never have a short update and that is a good thing. I liked the justification of why the character didn't care if his actions weren't like him near the end of this update, seems like realistic reason.

After risking one's life and being reunited with Ilmeni I can understand why he would act a bit differently. Anyways please continue, I'll be watching. ph34r.gif


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post Nov 14 2006, 09:04 PM
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I was very glad to see that this battle had the epic feel a fight with the Redoran Archmaster deserved. It was good to see that Sethyas can hold his own in a fair fight, and I'm of course very happy he won the fight. I was particularly pleased with the final words passing between Venim and Sethyas; it felt very appropriate for someone who measured everything by combat strength to recognize the Moon and Star once he had been defeated.
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post Nov 15 2006, 07:39 AM
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Whoot! Ilmeni is back! Ok, so Sethyas can now further his plan of saving the world, but that's not so important at the moment. smile.gif Heh, I bet they both have been avoiding the other out of fear for being rejected. Now remember, her father wasn't opposed to their relationship.


Almost forgot. Excellent fight scene!

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post Nov 16 2006, 07:44 PM
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I have run out of words to praise this update.....beautifully described, and by all means the cooperation between you and "commentasaurus" was just marvellous. I´ve read this part about three times now and ...woah"!


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post Nov 16 2006, 10:58 PM
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And am I gald to have gotten the first reply to that excellent update or what? tongue.gif


So, I'm holding my breath for the next update. so don't let me suffocate!!!! wacko.gif
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post Nov 19 2006, 03:51 AM
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post Nov 19 2006, 04:43 AM
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"I have a people to unite, and a God to kill. Most importantly, I have a Temple to piss off."

That is a phrase I'm going to remember years from now Black Hand! laugh.gif *Laughes like some silly child* Well, it looks like the Tribunal might have to share the limelight...... or just get out of it.......
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post Nov 19 2006, 04:50 AM
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post Nov 19 2006, 08:51 AM
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Again, wonderful display of emotion within the dialogue between Sethyas and Athyn in particular. Fantastic!

I look forward to seeing what Sethyas plans to do next.


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post Nov 19 2006, 10:28 AM
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Ah, the confrontation with the temple. I'm telling you, the potential for that scene is endless!

Let's hope Sethyas doesn't piss the temple off too much.


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post Nov 19 2006, 08:23 PM
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post Nov 19 2006, 08:30 PM
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Ahhhh...hilarious! I do love this story! The conversations between Ilmeni and Sethyas...oh gosh..hehe so truthworthy as in RL!

My my......as I said in my comment on Trey´s story...Now I really have an urge to write!

Thank you Blackie for giving us this great story!


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post Nov 19 2006, 11:35 PM
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The master of dialogue strikes again! I found this update to be quite an enjoyable update. Particular this line had me chuckling:

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“You convinced some women to come here? I will inform the men to bathe immediately!”


Great stuff, Black!


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post Nov 20 2006, 12:52 AM
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