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post Jun 3 2011, 11:25 PM
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ok, Im no writer, but heres a little prologue that should introduce the story and let non-vegas players get an idea for the setting.


The Mojave Wasteland. Most folks think of it as a barren desert, filled with nothing but gangs of chem-crazed convicts and mutant bugs. Not a bad description, but us wastelanders see a lot more than the puddles of irradiated ooze. We made homes in the crumbling ruins of the cities, We tamed the more useful mutated animals and hell, we even made our own card game.

I'm a peace-keeper by trade. I travel from town to town, helping people with problems and putting bullets in legion skulls. Sometimes though, I'll see a pretty little nik-nak that the owner doesn't seem to be watching, and it might "go missing". I like to think of it as a bonus that they forgot to mention. Still, people love me.

While I'm sitting at a campfire, cooking up a pot of squirrel stew, Travellers sometimes spot me and have a seat next to me and my posse. They always ask me the same thing: "Go on! tell us how you got so damn famous!"
I always tell them the same thing, that I Retired from NCR and put my skills to better use. Its not a lie, but its not the whole story. I'm getting on now, and it's about time I let the world know the REAL story of Raymond Will.

Mojave wasteland:

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CONSTRUCTIVE criticism welcome!

This post has been edited by grif11: Jun 4 2011, 09:36 PM

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grif11   Unshelled Bullets   Jun 3 2011, 11:25 PM
King Coin   Hmm not sure what to say other than you have me in...   Jun 4 2011, 04:39 AM
hazmick   I've never played new vegas, this could be goo...   Jun 4 2011, 05:01 AM
mALX   I've played New Vegas and loved it with a few ...   Jun 4 2011, 05:16 AM
ureniashtram   Grif The Eleventh? Writing a FanFic? By the blessi...   Jun 4 2011, 10:47 AM
Grits   Iím a non-Vegas player, so thank you for setting t...   Jun 4 2011, 03:18 PM
grif11   King coin, Hazmick and mALX - Good to know I'v...   Jun 4 2011, 05:43 PM
Zalphon   A Vegas Fan-fic, this should be good :)   Jun 5 2011, 02:18 AM
grif11   [b]chapter 1: On a Limb and a Prayer. From an ear...   Jun 6 2011, 04:53 PM
mALX   Great Chapter !!! I loved this foresh...   Jun 6 2011, 05:49 PM
King Coin   So the hero's a sniper. I can't remember, ...   Jun 6 2011, 10:40 PM
grif11   So the hero's a sniper. I can't remember,...   Jun 6 2011, 10:49 PM
grif11   mALX - Thanks for the compliments! It means a...   Jun 8 2011, 10:56 PM
grif11   Chapter 2: Empty Nest Eagle was an old man. Neari...   Jun 9 2011, 07:17 PM
grif11   I Hope Im not talking to myself, but chapter 3: Ta...   Jun 12 2011, 12:44 AM
Grits   Sniping from inside a gift shop dinosaur is an ima...   Jun 12 2011, 01:09 AM
mALX   Sorry it took so long to get here and read this, i...   Jun 23 2011, 04:26 AM
King Coin   How did I neglect to comment? I've kept up wit...   Jun 23 2011, 04:45 AM
grif11   I'm delighted my little fanfic isn't a fai...   Jul 6 2011, 11:08 PM
mALX   I'm delighted my little fanfic isn't a fa...   Jul 7 2011, 12:43 AM
King Coin   Coin - I'm still not sure how to include Boon...   Jul 7 2011, 01:58 AM
grif11   Here it is, AT LAST! [b]Chapter 3:Taking Flig...   Jul 11 2011, 08:46 PM
mALX   Oooh, is he going to join the NCR? Really smart t...   Jul 11 2011, 10:59 PM
old Andy   As a former scout sniper with the 1st recc -marine...   Jul 15 2011, 09:02 AM
King Coin   I'm happy he's joining up with the NCR. I ...   Jul 16 2011, 04:33 AM
treydog   Caught up with- and caught up IN- this story. Gre...   Jul 17 2011, 03:46 PM
grif11   Sorry this took so long, but I've been distrac...   Jul 31 2011, 07:06 PM
treydog   Woo Hoo! Update! I like the fact that yo...   Aug 1 2011, 01:51 AM
Grits   Whew, a fight! Ray gets some experience with h...   Aug 1 2011, 03:28 PM
grif11   yikes, I've forgotten the chorrol fanfic tradi...   Aug 1 2011, 05:33 PM
mALX   His first kill kind of brings the reader back to E...   Aug 21 2011, 12:53 PM
grif11   Well, since caboose has made his own fan fiction a...   Oct 7 2011, 11:24 PM
Grits   I'm glad to hear it, grif! :)   Oct 7 2011, 11:36 PM

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