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The Metal Mallet |
Nov 14 2006, 02:27 AM
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Joined: 18-June 06
From: Kitchener, ON, Canada
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It was an honour and a priviledge to work on this update with you. Everything surrounding the fight was wonderfully written and build up the expectation of the fight amazingly well. And the ending was beautifully emotion. And Sethyas gets to the chance to get his freak on! Yea!! Oh yea, and thanks for the plug as well! And I see that the commentasaurus remark still lives! Awesome!
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I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola. Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus"
"This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones)
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Kiln |
Nov 14 2006, 08:31 AM
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Forum Bard
Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates
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Best thing about your work is the frequent and incredibly long updates, seems like you never have a short update and that is a good thing. I liked the justification of why the character didn't care if his actions weren't like him near the end of this update, seems like realistic reason. After risking one's life and being reunited with Ilmeni I can understand why he would act a bit differently. Anyways please continue, I'll be watching.
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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jack cloudy |
Nov 15 2006, 07:39 AM
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Master
Joined: 11-February 06
From: In a cold place.
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Whoot! Ilmeni is back! Ok, so Sethyas can now further his plan of saving the world, but that's not so important at the moment. Heh, I bet they both have been avoiding the other out of fear for being rejected. Now remember, her father wasn't opposed to their relationship. Almost forgot. Excellent fight scene! This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Nov 15 2006, 07:40 AM
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Fabulous hairneedle attack! I'm gonna be bald before I hit twenty.
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The Metal Mallet |
Nov 19 2006, 11:35 PM
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Master
Joined: 18-June 06
From: Kitchener, ON, Canada
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The master of dialogue strikes again! I found this update to be quite an enjoyable update. Particular this line had me chuckling: QUOTE “You convinced some women to come here? I will inform the men to bathe immediately!” Great stuff, Black!
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I am currently a Writer in The Order of Schola. Official Fan Fiction Forum "Commentasaurus"
"This body, holding me makes me feel eternal. All this pain is an illusion" - Parabola (Tool) "This here ain't called boasting, it's called truthin' " - Mango Kid (Danko Jones)
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