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Dantrag
post Aug 12 2005, 04:07 PM
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This is a bit of a humorous short story about Red's character. shakur "The Red" Ir Shin. Yes, I have his permission to write about him. Enjoy.

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Facing assassins was nothing compared to this foe. A mage that had the potential to kill a god was as easy as swatting a fly compared to this foe. No matter how many times you get rid of it, it always comes back. It is always around me. When I sleep, it is there. When I eat, it is there. Its unbridled power threatens my very being. It makes me cough and sneeze, just breathing around this beast. For the first time in my life, I am afraid. For the first time in my life, a sword cannot kill my enemy.

-Shakur Ir Shin

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"It is in our house." Shakur said to his wife Heddvild. "The demon has a short time remaining in this world." he said determinedly.

"Yes, I am in here." it called to Shakur, mocking him.

"The bedroom!" he exclaimed, running towards the room.

He took a rag out of his pocket and scanned the room looking for the beast. Where could it be?

"Come out and face me!" Shakur yelled.

If the beast wouldn't fight fair, neither would he. He put the rag back in his pocket and took a deep breath to strengthen his resolve. He had to use the new power he had discovered. In all his years of being an Ansei, he never would have guessed that he could summon something other than a sword - or more useful. He quickly summoned his new weapon and gripped it tightly as he searched under the bed - there it was!

With three swift strokes of his new weapon, the beast was gone, but it would soon return. Shakur didn't know how long he had to live. The demon always chased him, always mocked his efforts to rid himself of it...

He began coughing - just being around the beast seemed to make it hard to breathe. He ran out of the room, away from that foul air.

Heddvild looked down at Shakur's new glowing weapon. "What is that?" she asked, confused.

Shakur held it up proudly. "This, my dear, is my spirit duster."

"So you got the dust in the bedroom?"

"Yes, but we must find a new place to live!" Shakur said, traces of fear apparent in his voice. "I don't want to be killed by it."

"Alright." Heddvild conceded. "But only because of your allergies."

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post Sep 29 2005, 04:31 PM
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Dantrag   The Beast   Aug 12 2005, 04:07 PM
Kell-Reevor   *Points at Shakur* Ha Ha Dust sucks, great story...   Aug 12 2005, 04:11 PM
minque   Haha...very good Dantrag!! You have talen...   Aug 12 2005, 04:13 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   LMAO it was great I can just picture it too.   Aug 12 2005, 04:58 PM
BobV   Lmao :D   Aug 12 2005, 05:04 PM
Neck' Thall   What they said* Points to BobV and Megil...I know ...   Aug 12 2005, 05:50 PM
Aki   :lol: Funny.   Aug 12 2005, 07:05 PM
treydog   "Bring out the Broom of Mighty Cleaning! ...   Aug 12 2005, 08:02 PM
Kiln   Very nice Dantrag, is it hard writing about someon...   Aug 12 2005, 09:22 PM
minque   yeah....I think IŽll let him have a go with Serene...   Aug 12 2005, 09:24 PM
Dantrag   any suggestions on something weird about Serene?...   Aug 13 2005, 01:27 AM
Konradude   .....Okaaaay.... Good though. :)   Aug 12 2005, 09:26 PM
Channler   lol, brilliant Dantrag...   Aug 13 2005, 03:44 AM
BobV   Dantrag...Could you think of something involving A...   Aug 13 2005, 04:05 AM
Dantrag   Sure. PM me some stuff. (Dantrag's parody ...   Aug 13 2005, 04:09 AM
Red   Amazing Danny, The opening paragraph was really go...   Aug 13 2005, 08:26 PM
Wolfie   Lol that was great. You now have my permission to ...   Aug 13 2005, 08:28 PM
minque   And certainl you have my permission to involve Ser...   Aug 14 2005, 11:32 AM
Red   I still think we should go with Ash Yam befriend...   Aug 25 2005, 02:33 PM
The Wolf   Excellent stuff :)   Sep 29 2005, 04:31 PM


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